Reviews for What Money Buys
Susan chapter 1 . 4/22/2003
well..it seemed like a pretty good story. I like the part where AC has psychic abilities and takes the life of Romulus towards the end. Quite interesting. Later.
Black Dragon Eyes chapter 2 . 4/22/2003
very creative! i love the names you gave these people )

i wanna be psychic! doc is cool
Black Dragon Eyes chapter 1 . 4/22/2003
whoa awesome! romulus and remus! i love greek mythology _

creepy version of it though O.o

nice chapter! onto the next one. . . and might i ask, who are you? you added me to your favorite authors list. . . do i know you?
Jessica chapter 1 . 4/1/2003
I like it. very kewl stuff! enough description n stuff so u dont' get lost as to wats goin on. i like it!
Sarah chapter 2 . 3/29/2003
that was awsome

i think you need to put me in one, or am I going to be the General person?

ne ways they both were really good.

I hope your writer's block goes away.
Ideadread chapter 1 . 3/13/2003
It was a good story. However, I did not find it descriptive enough and the sentence structure was not the best. The way you kept it entirely under A.C.'s point of view without straying into other character's mind was excellent.

Good Job!
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