Reviews for Immortal Soul |
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![]() ![]() ![]() OOh funky! I really like this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() o..chilled to the bone. I loved the descriptions. D Thankyou for your nice review and nice advice. I took your advice with great care and edited my story. heh, it was my first serious, original story..so I understand it wasn't my best. I will try my best on it though. And I will try to edit my stories more often, rather then just sending them out to right after I'm done. I really enjoyed your story and I hope you will write more in the futre. Good Luck. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Geez that was one evil ghost. Haha. Good job! I liked it. It's always good too like something. Yay! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. that was good. if not disturbing. hee hee. i hope i never become a vengeful ghost. i think i would regret it later. but whatever happened to her brother? i liked it though! great story! |
![]() ![]() Wow Liz... creep me out much?... Do you have some repressed desires to push someone off a cliff or something?... Creepier than hell Liz... I never knew you were so fucked up... |
![]() ![]() Nice. Very nice. As usual. :) Loved it, Liz. It seems a bit more even than your other writings. God, growing as a writer is wonderful, ain't it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() *mouth drops open* .that was AWESOME i REALLY liked it! Keep it UP chicka! AND FINSIHT EH GOING TO HOGWARTS FICCY DAMNIT! |