Reviews for Wings to Fly
Sapphire Spectrum chapter 1 . 2/14/2006
Beautiful. Really, I loved it. The whole idea of angel wings is beautiful, and the idea of not being able to fly. I loved it.
Yume Megami chapter 1 . 8/9/2004
There was some repetition in this peice...but not too much, just enough to it "glow"(aka...be better).
I liked how the last stanza, the first half of it at least, was the same as the first stanza.
Dream
Chibis223 chapter 1 . 8/1/2004
The poem is enhanced by the repitition. To have hope replaced by a realization of the harsh reality is hard...
Winged One1 chapter 1 . 6/27/2003
This poem strikes a winged one right in the heart...But it is a wonderful poem nonetheless! The last stanza thing was excellent.

winged one
CurlsofSerenity chapter 1 . 5/29/2003
hmm, nice I like how 'you' can fly but then it is 'taken away' sort to speak. I wonder if it is in referance to any restrictions in life.
light beam chapter 1 . 3/4/2003
hey well a very sad poem i would say but i think it is really good and well wriiten keep it up!
DragonsEclipse chapter 1 . 3/1/2003
Nice. I like this! Keep writing! _