Reviews for Bleeding Hearts
Impressionist chapter 1 . 3/19/2003
hmm...it's intensely sad, but lacking something. maybe more back-story? or just something in the middle to fill it. like an oreo. umm...yes.
WalkingOnWater chapter 1 . 3/8/2003
! Tis me! Nikki I LOVE PICCOLO with a new penname if i hadn't told you already! Well this was a great poem! So short yet so sweet it went straight through a whole lost lifetime for a boy and father i really loved it! sorry if i didn't read your poetry for a LONG time i hadn't read any stuff for a long time! SO NOW I'VE COME BACK! anyways, im on to read some more of your stuff!
sweetheart88 chapter 1 . 3/6/2003
oh wow thats very sad but it very good
Silent Dreamer chapter 1 . 3/6/2003
oi that's depressing.. sorry haven't reviewed in a while! blah school is boring!