Reviews for Final Days
Mireille Caelarily chapter 1 . 5/26/2006
Creative and fun, but with a very predictable ending.
AtrophicGaze chapter 1 . 9/22/2005
"Three days later, the CEO caught Bill and his wife in bed together, and wanted in. The three now live together in a villa in Tuscany" if only it were that easy.

I liked the ending, even if it was slightly cliched. The last sentance about Dan's screaming was quite morbid and good. cheers.
LEM chapter 1 . 12/4/2003
It's like an Outer Limits type story. Shows that you better live your life like you should because payback is a real witch of a mistress.
Versipellis chapter 1 . 8/31/2003
oh, sucks to be him. i had a feeling though, when he went to the loan shark, that he wouldn't die.
krystaldragon chapter 1 . 9/2/2002
My gods that was hilarious... heh.. kinda reminiscent of Joe vs. the Volcano, but much funnier! Later,

~kd
RobynWindsong chapter 1 . 12/2/2000
Ironic! That's funny.
Lark chapter 1 . 11/28/2000
LMAO! This is hilarious. Poor Dan! I wonder what I'd do if I had two weeks to live. Probably half of the stuff in this story :)
ME chapter 1 . 11/28/2000
that was so ironic! I hate ironic stories! I feel so bad for the ppl in them, but this was funny anyway. I loved the ending! lol. Keep it up!
clara200 chapter 1 . 11/28/2000
oh no poor guy.
Tracy chapter 1 . 11/28/2000
You should have let him die from the tumor. I love stories where people get their revenge.