|Reviews for A Marriage Of Convenience|
| ThePirateOfTheSeaOfMonsters chapter 39 . 8/19
Oh my god
OH. MY. GAWD.
Wow...I read your whole story in one day and I think I am going to cry (not literately, I am just venting out my after-read-shock). This was a roller coaster and I absolutely despised the last chapter down. I really admired your courage as a writer to write a not-so-happy end to such a popular story, but as it turned out, Clark and Carly/ Parker and Lizzie, do get together and unicorns are flying around with rainbows and sunshine in the background with pink hearts and glitter falling from the sky. And, I think that is beautiful. After the shocking and stunning end of the last chapter, the epilogue proved to be a warm blanket for the readers. And, I adored it. I really love the fact that couple gets together and is really happy. Although your grammar was a little tipsy sometimes along with some typos. I liked it, very, very much. Although, I need to point out a major mistake in the epilogue: THE TENSE. You have used present tense, to I assume, give a feel of things happening in the now. But, whenever one story writes, one is telling about the things that have already occurred in the past, however recent that might. So, you need to change the tense to past tense.
And, I absolutely LOVE your story. Thank you for writing it.
*gives you a hug*
| Diving in chapter 13 . 5/2
No offense or anything, but I'm french and I didn't understood that sentence in french. What did you mean to say?
Nevertheless I like your story.
| Sonnie Luise chapter 12 . 1/25
I Love This Story! It's so funny! I cant't help laughing when it read it! Thank you soooooo much for writing such a wonderful story! I love the characters you shape, Especially C & C! It's such a great fun in reading the little word-fights between Clark and Carly!
| xdxp chapter 39 . 12/2/2014
This was an experience. I am actually speechless.
| Grespitchied chapter 38 . 11/3/2014
Wow I was really confused I was like who the hell are Liv and Parker! Hahahahaha
| Grespitchied chapter 13 . 11/3/2014
Nyahahahahahah she got him there :))
| Guest chapter 3 . 8/13/2014
Why do they rasp when angry, that's ... Scary?
| Nandy chapter 2 . 2/16/2014
I really like the way you have written the story in first person. Hoping for more such stories
| William Kayspear chapter 3 . 2/15/2014
| William Kayspear chapter 1 . 2/15/2014
I love this chick
| Guest chapter 39 . 6/5/2013
Not "defiantly", "definitely".
| leavesfallingup chapter 38 . 4/21/2013
A truly beautifully written story. It would actually make an excellent movie, though it would be difficult to contain this story in two hours and too much would probably be lost.
Congratulations on pushing through this four year project and still carrying it off so well.
| Daily Beauty chapter 38 . 4/9/2013
an open ending.. yes? you write beautifully. i mean, it reflected real life shit. i have learned how to appreciate these kinds of stories and that is why i want to tell you that you did a great job with the ending. thank you so much.
| Paradigm08 chapter 38 . 2/9/2013
Six years late on this one and I'm sad to say that. I wish I read this a long time ago, but I'm also glad that I finally received a chance to find and read this. I personally enjoyed the way you finished the story. It was creative in the "book" sense, but also tied up nicely. The characters were real and that is always something I look for when I start a book or story. I really enjoyed Carly/Liv - her character was true and mostly hilarious to me. I'm sure you've heard this many times before, but well done on a great story. Read this in one day - not a minute wasted. Favorited for sure.
| Epic Asian chapter 1 . 10/26/2012
very intresting and original intro paragraph