Well, another nice chappy. You're doing well, and fast!

Since when do u speak elf? Great chappy, but I, personnally, would have run away long ago.

a cliff hanger ! Why! lol I thought it was a good cliff hanger, it makes me want to read the next chapter even more then I already did. This was a great story , I'm definally coming back to read more.

Please if you have time , pleaze check out one of my stories. Please .

This is a perfect manga. Please update again

-Destin Scar

Luki, sure fire way to ace english: write. Believe it or not, when u write you use proper dialog forms, punctuation, sentence forms, plot outline, comprehension, imagination, and manny other things. I tune out my Language arts teacher when she rambles on about that stuff for too long. Excellent chappy.

Good plot, too bad your note updating regulary but if you ever finish it I bet it will be as good as your other keep writing.

~Eclairis

Continue with this! I love this!

In a word: COOL!

This is really different from everything else you've written! It's got a totally different 'feel' to it and...well, what can I say?

Hm...

Mon is cool, Fitz is cute, and Thatz has a really cool name.

Thatz:...that's the only good thing you can say about me?

Ilo: UH-OH! she's started the conversation again...

AG: Well,_ Thatz is cool and responsible!

Thatz: Thank you.

Rettin: ...crap. I've got competition.

Thatz: Who the heck are you?

Rettin: (eyes him darkely) Your worst nightmare.

Fiend: You are quoting a cartoon lizerd who wants to be a dragon out of a disney film, do you know that?

Rettin:...

Thatz:...I still dont know who you are...

AG: oops, gotta go! Review again soon!

Bye!

PLEASE CONTINUE! Pretty, pretty please with everything u like on top! Very few authors actually write good stories, but you always do! No one can guess what's in store, either, because you're completely original! Please, I'm begging u!

I don't know. What does it mean? Continue!

COOL!