Reviews for Journal of a Serial Killer
Saphire Phoenix chapter 1 . 9/13/2005
Unique, not seen very much and when it is it is welcomed. I would like to see where this goes, but my only request is to play on making it more realitic.

A real serial killer isn't stupid enough to bury a body next to a stream..or bury one at all. Or perhaps you're purposely trying to outline the character's youth and young (but corrupted) mind. If this is the case then I suggest writing in a more first person style (with descriptions of inner thoughts that is going on in the serial killer's mind), etc.
slave to the voices chapter 1 . 5/31/2004
Your writing mechanics need a little work, but I thought this was a pretty good idea (I'd actually thought about doing something like it and ended up with To Whom It May Concern; check it out if you get a chance) Anyway, good job, keep writing.
**Slave**
Lucy Ricardo chapter 1 . 7/21/2003
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Lizzy-D chapter 1 . 3/5/2003
Wow very unique i like it very into the mind of the i hope you stories are the best.I too have one

Lizzy