Type your review here. I am only at chapter one, and your story moved me already, simpathysing with her, for her parents that are only looking out for there own safety, and she must tend to herself, how sad. Great start , makes one wants to read further to see how it unfolds.

I do not know if you still check your reviews since it has been quite awhile since you finished this story, but I just wanted to say this was a great story. The plot was interesting, and it held my attention. The tension between the characters was definitely palpable. If you ever consider publishing, let me know so I can get a copy. All in all, great work. Just work on some minor grammatical errors and you'll be fantastic!

Awwww. I love this. Though an epilogue is much appreciated, I'm content with how it ended.

I liked the first 3 chapters! A lot!

Wow...just wow

Ah, I don't know what to take in from this. In the first chapter Leah says that she is shy and hates attention but throughout the rest of the chapters she has been nothing but the absolute opposite. She is acting like the spoiled brat one would expect a rich girl who is pampered by her parents to be.

"No one pushes Leah Townsend around." Yeah well, your parents do. It seems like you tried to create a tortured, unfortunate rich girl who looks like she has everything but nothing but frankly that description falls short. Just declaring that in the first chapter doesn't make it true, you have to keep it constant through the rest of the chapters as well. Sean is right. Leah is very annoying.

Loved it
I felt I need more closure for the ending but I still Loved it with all my heart

In the first chapter, when Leah called Jack, she introduced herself as Leah Thornton. But now she's Leah Townsend. Which is it?

OH MY GOODNESS SO BEAUTIFUL

Kind of cliché, but isn't everything? I like it that way. The only downside is not knowing what happens to then after you end the story. Cliffhangers :(
An epilogue would be nice but not necessary.

This whole story was abrupt . In the begining this story seemed promising then it turned corny .The rating should be T . There was nothing mature in this .

Reading this has been both awkward and exciting for me considering my name really is Leah ... if you get how it feels from my point of view I hope you do.
I loved this story if you are still looking for ideas for another one I have some.
If your into fantasy then you can make a story of dragon tamers, magicians, mythical creatures, People with special powers in a fantasy world I thought you might find it fun to write.
I shouldn't be saying this but I have always thought of a romance scene where a spell is cast to bind your lover ... literally.

This should be published. Really good!

Okay, so I love this story! Like so much more than I love one that Star123 had written, about football and all. I always love spies and those kind of romance and all. I really love the storyline you've created, it was very talented. This is story is so amazing that I couldn't stop reading until it's done, it's unforgettable. Anyway...I really enjoy this story that you've written and finished. I just love it!
-Alice

Lol so x.x i was testing out your story and .. He slapped her ! Lool interesting .. Very interesting