|Reviews for In the Eye of the Tiger|
| Mii3.1415926 chapter 31 . 7/23
| augmentedDREAMS chapter 6 . 7/15
Ah, I don't know what to take in from this. In the first chapter Leah says that she is shy and hates attention but throughout the rest of the chapters she has been nothing but the absolute opposite. She is acting like the spoiled brat one would expect a rich girl who is pampered by her parents to be.
"No one pushes Leah Townsend around." Yeah well, your parents do. It seems like you tried to create a tortured, unfortunate rich girl who looks like she has everything but nothing but frankly that description falls short. Just declaring that in the first chapter doesn't make it true, you have to keep it constant through the rest of the chapters as well. Sean is right. Leah is very annoying.
| lilcarellijohn chapter 31 . 6/16
I felt I need more closure for the ending but I still Loved it with all my heart
| Guest chapter 3 . 5/26
In the first chapter, when Leah called Jack, she introduced herself as Leah Thornton. But now she's Leah Townsend. Which is it?
| Ilsa with an I chapter 31 . 10/12/2014
OH MY GOODNESS SO BEAUTIFUL
| fivesevenfive chapter 31 . 8/23/2014
Kind of cliché, but isn't everything? I like it that way. The only downside is not knowing what happens to then after you end the story. Cliffhangers :(
An epilogue would be nice but not necessary.
| Guest chapter 31 . 6/30/2014
This whole story was abrupt . In the begining this story seemed promising then it turned corny .The rating should be T . There was nothing mature in this .
| Yuki98 chapter 31 . 2/10/2014
Reading this has been both awkward and exciting for me considering my name really is Leah ... if you get how it feels from my point of view I hope you do.
I loved this story if you are still looking for ideas for another one I have some.
If your into fantasy then you can make a story of dragon tamers, magicians, mythical creatures, People with special powers in a fantasy world I thought you might find it fun to write.
I shouldn't be saying this but I have always thought of a romance scene where a spell is cast to bind your lover ... literally.
| LotusTears chapter 31 . 11/8/2013
This should be published. Really good!
| Alice Nguyen1 chapter 31 . 7/16/2013
Okay, so I love this story! Like so much more than I love one that Star123 had written, about football and all. I always love spies and those kind of romance and all. I really love the storyline you've created, it was very talented. This is story is so amazing that I couldn't stop reading until it's done, it's unforgettable. Anyway...I really enjoy this story that you've written and finished. I just love it!
| LeweBecki chapter 5 . 4/26/2013
Lol so x.x i was testing out your story and .. He slapped her ! Lool interesting .. Very interesting
| Gothic-innocence16 chapter 31 . 2/25/2013
Whoa this story was amazing. I loved it so much; every time I finished reading one chapter I couldn't wait to get to the next
| luzanima chapter 27 . 2/7/2013
You mentioned have a website with other pieces posted on it. Is that still the case? I didn't see it linked in your profile anymore, but I'd love to read more of your work!
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/5/2012
Good story, with a cliché plot. The characters seems inconsistent, they abruptly change personality depending on the scene. some parts seems rushed and some seems to be dragging. Please don't take my criticisms to heart. To be honest I could never hope to write as good as you. This has been a great read I had in a while. I could easily get lost in the scene and you describe Leah's emotion really well.
| CrimsonsNight chapter 31 . 8/5/2012
Its a good story, it has some plot issue and some major character flaws. It seemed rushed and lacked any real acton. But it was very good with a great plot. I really enjoyed reading did a great job!