Reviews for Troubled Heart
Love is for suckers chapter 1 . 6/26/2003
great stuff...i love the ending...keep goin and thanks for revewing mine

-korie
Gevo chapter 1 . 6/25/2003
good poem...
Quanta chapter 1 . 6/25/2003
I liked this poem, especially the last line. It really rings very true. I have one quick suggestion though. This line: "As your hands tear at your hair" I would suggest "As your hands tear away your hair," as I think it helps the flow. Either way, great poem!
Blue chapter 1 . 4/6/2003
excellent analogies.

at has a surreal property to it that seems to draw you in, though the fact is it's a reality, and thats the beauty of it.

the format is very plain though.

its good to have sinple sentences for people to understand, but a few complex thoughts or riddles makes it all the more interesting.

very good, indeed.
Justin chapter 1 . 3/15/2003
nice tara