|Reviews for Eternity|
| Sonata chapter 1 . 5/14/2003
o...i like this one!~the repetitive phrases...the symbolism...its very good!~i really cant even explain the reasons...its just one of those poems that jus...speaks to me~i like it!~keep writing!~
| RonethDragon Tiamat chapter 1 . 3/31/2003
whoa. fascinating. i really like it. i read most of your poems but really couldn't find words to describe how i felt...
| Pardalis chapter 1 . 3/6/2003
I can relate. at a point where you just don't care. Very discriptive, but I think it could be better if you skipped lines (meaning put it into a more poetic form).