Reviews for Across the Ocean
snowtiger13731 chapter 1 . 6/2/2003
i like this one. and a lot of poems that i review i don't really like that much, so i guess this is a compliment coming from me. i like how you incorporated the ocean scene-i've alwayz loved the whole ocean thing-and the thing about having new experiences and everything. i especially like the 2nd and 3rd lines.

Needa S chapter 1 . 3/6/2003
Very good and a good job putting it together as well! Keep writing.