|Reviews for The Decision of the Little Black Rat|
| chickadee chapter 1 . 3/11/2003
another amazing metaphor is incredible, and there is definite voice. lovely, lovely, lovely. :}
| MoshiMoshiQueen chapter 1 . 3/11/2003
This was very well done. I'm a great fan of complex poems, and I would try to figure out the meaning of this poem, but usually when I write complex I write them because I know no one will understand their true meaning. so my thoughts will stay my own. Again this was very well done, and you should be proud of your writing talent.
| Chiaroscuro chapter 1 . 3/7/2003
Well done - but just a bit vague in places. I won't be too terribly critical of a poem which 'feels' as this one does. However - knowing something of your situation - I'd like to be able to feel and experience more of things as you do. A touch more description in opportune places would add a great deal to this already excellent poem. I'm a fan of Tolkien as well, and I can say with a fair degree of certainty that I've understood your references. They are well-placed, indeed. I admit the fact that I am entertained. May you ever improve in the future - your skies immeasurably high and clear.