Reviews for Odious Spider
Ebony Moonlight chapter 1 . 6/30/2003
::clapping:: Wonderful wonderful! You truley are wonderful at writing dark poetry! Keep up the wonderful work!

~The One and Only
Lisa Robinson chapter 1 . 3/7/2003
Wow. Interesting! Very Talented indeed! Excellent Job! If you find the time please check out my poem 'Look at yourself'. Thanks.
Impressionist chapter 1 . 3/7/2003
homosapian? try human. it works much better with the flow and such things like that. homosapian just makes it sound like you're desperately grasping for descriptive words and that's what you chose. I would search for something else.

Other than that, it's not bad writing. it doesn't make a lot of sense to me, but that's because I don't know you or your mind. maybe I'll look at some more of your work.