Aw, that was so cute. Very well done for a one shot. Would be nice if you added more to it. I think it'd be a great story. :)

Adorable. Absolutely adorable. Good job.

That didn't suck man xO S'cute x3! *claps*

this story was really sweet. so pretty. argh! reading things like this only makes me want a boyfriend even more! pittsburgh is like the least gay city in the world. anyways, one of the things i liked best about this story is that it wasn't too long. it was just perfect, and it was really powerful, too. as i read it i believed even more in the power of love, esp. gay love. keep on going, man!

peace and love, bran

Aww, that's so cute! I've been really desperate for fluff lately (which is why I'm reading it at 3 AM ; ) and this is just what I needed, lol. Excellent _ One-shot, or more coming?

What a nice story ! You needn't write more : well written, sweet and incredibly soft. I loved it. Johnny and Mike are perfect together !

complete enjoyable (albeit well ritten) sap

that's awesome! I like it very much.

aw. nice and simple. we like lots :) it's ok if it doesn't get updated cos it's a great ending [even if it's not meant to be one]. anyway. that's about it :)

Cali.

plz r&r my fic if you have time?

Thanks!

Gah!

Why do you keep rounding it off so quickly! That could have turned into something really good but you always stopping it!

They didn't even get into anything good?

No angst, no aftermath if anyone found out..*sighs*

But still D I liked it.

lol, that is a good story...and it sounds familiar, if you now what i mean?

This is very cute. . You have a lot of options left open for this story as well. If you decided to continue it, it could be about how they cope with hiding their relationship in the small town and how families and friends might react. . I really like this story, even though it's short. Ah the joy of kissing. Heh, keep up the good work!

I liked it. It was very sweet. I could sense the feelings that shifted from awkwardness between them at the beginning to a comfort of sorts once they had revealed themselves to each other. Very nice.

slip

aww!that was soo cute! and so well written too ! the only reason i'm gonna sue you is because you might not continue! do at least some kind of prologues i wanna read more of it!

Very cute. go, boys. :) And I don't think the title is bad, because that was what the story was about; the kiss and the after effects.

Love,

Malaika

PS: I read your bio. You say you're not talented? You're wrong.