Reviews for From the Inside Out
wildtenderness chapter 1 . 6/21/2003
i like the way you wrote it though i can't relate to the poem.
Ranewen Surion chapter 1 . 5/14/2003
This whole poem is good, but I think that the lines "Dying from the inside out"...I dont know, but they really touch me, they seem to be the strongest words and they stick out. That's probably what you wanted to do since you repeated it several times, but you did a good job at it. It flows nicely.
not sure yet chapter 1 . 3/7/2003
morbid, with a nice flow, beautiful poem
teh tarik chapter 1 . 3/7/2003
I like this! u seriously do have a way with words.

Do write some more!
Seph Lorraine chapter 1 . 3/7/2003
A fairly nice poem, I would say. It's kind of cliche, though, yes. As there is not direct situation given, all I really gather from it (as a reader) is a senseless bout of angst.

There are a few syllabic disrruptions, as well. The number of syllables in your lines seems to gather a pattern of sorts, only to be thrown off by an odd line or two, consistantly throughout the poem. It's difficult to follow the flow of thought with the disrupption of syllables.

The poem does have some great potential, though, but what can I say? We all have to release our emotions some way. If it helped you to write it, then I guess it can only be all the better. :)
Chandra-Moon chapter 1 . 3/7/2003
wow that was really good. i hope you fee

l better