That was awesome, I love the 4th chapter!

Go on! Write more I loved this, I loved how you said everyone probably thought he was ozzy osbourne, I laughed so hard because thats what my friend says she always makes fun of him for that, her nickname for him is always Ozzy, lol.

so you better update sson, not wait any more. please

I think maybe you should do a little more research on Davey... He was a Catholic, and he lives in a nowhere town. But otherwise good.

I love this too, you really have amazing talent. You really got me feeling Davey's emotions. I did notice in the flashbacks that there were a few times that you switched from first to third person. I was really excited to see that you put Silver and Cold in there, seeing as I love that song. Keep writing!

Hmm.. Well, lets just say I cried. Poor Davey.

i loved it Brooky, poor poor Davey everything keeps happening to that poor man! ne who don't you think Bert's so sweet!

wow. personally i'm glad that you went on with the story. this is one of my favorites. i really like this one. and i like this new chapter. can't wait to read the rest of it.

-meghan

Very nice story. I think it'd be best to leave it there...but that's just my opinion.

beautiful, amazingly done. as a huge fan of afi myself, it brought me to tears.

GO ON! GO ON!

i like your story, and it is a pleasure to finally find a bit of fiction concerning davey; he deserves it. the only thing that irked me is that davey is a non-practising catholic, not a lutheran. i read that in a metal edge mag. a few years ago. that's all, and i think you should go on writing more fics concerning him!

you use the same people for every story

WooHoo you said said straight edge, i'm so proud! anyway i find when i read this it makes me think so thank you brooky for giving my mind exercises. Great chapter and keep it up you crazy coconut!

Wow, that was beautifully written. How much of the story is actually true? heh, nice job. Update please