Reviews for underground
indy chapter 8 . 6/30/2013
well. if i happened to stumble across someone like Nathen in real life i'd have dumped him by this point. and that would be a clever thing to do. but since it's a story...
it is good.

but im a seme, so it just doesnt sit *perfectly* with me.
mangatake chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
I tried getting past the third paragraph, but the narrator just rambles on and on and on. This must be a fantastic story if it has received over 200 reviews, so I'm hoping sometime in the not so distant future it might undergo a rewrite where all redundancy and mind-numbing idle chatter will be edited out, and then I will be among the first to pounce on this.

Thanks for sharing it at any rate. I'm sure it's lovely.
ladyfortune chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
Just started this story and I am loving it. Wonderfully written.
spoonring chapter 17 . 11/14/2011
awesome. sounds great, ill check it out.
just baja chapter 10 . 11/13/2011
ok. so. no, i haven't re-read this far yet.

but i have read the like, three? reviews i left the last time i read this.. i'm always appalled

as to what a nerdy loser i was when i was anyway! :)

i'll try to leave better reviews on the new story this time around.

-JB
just baja chapter 17 . 11/13/2011
ahh! i can't remember most of this! like.. any of it. i'm going to read it again. you're not removing it right?

either way, i'm excited to read the new version :)

-JB

oh.. i know i reviewed this before. but under a different name.
victorcharlie chapter 6 . 7/5/2009
oh-my-mother-'efing-freaking-god!

now say that realy fast a couple of times and you'll know what came out of my mouth for a good minute [other than drool].

that... that was "oh-my-mother-'effing-freaking-god!" good.

i am absolutely [now i really want to hear a british guy say it] speechless, this chapter has left me... rather hot and bothered my i tell you [hopefully that was your intention].

i must also tell you that i am love this. thank you.
Clazziquai Project chapter 16 . 4/16/2009
I absolutely love this story. I'm definitely adding it to my favorites. I have to admit one of my favorite chapters is the first one. Jaisyn's demeanor and thoughts were just so similar to mine that I almost laughed. lol I really like your characters' development too. I thought that Jaisyn and Nathen fell for each other way too quickly though. Jaisyn also forgave Nathen too easily on some things, but I guess anyone would if they were really in love with the person. Overall, I really did enjoy reading this. Your writing is amazing.
ladylookslikeadude chapter 16 . 4/2/2009
I totally loved it.
oo chapter 16 . 12/23/2008
one of my favorites

happy holidays and keep writing.
sleepy fox spirit chapter 16 . 12/2/2008
Some issues with spelling and grammar (like the distinction between its and it's) but otherwise an excellent story. Such odd ways of spelling the names but I like the twist on Jaisyn, much more original than other variations I've seen.
aripie chapter 16 . 10/8/2008
oomg first time reading this story (at least I think so...ahaha) and its great! gonna check yer others out :)
The Local Loon chapter 1 . 8/20/2008
Loved this. It was amazing, just sad I didn't find it earlier.
1000CraneFlight chapter 1 . 11/25/2007
I simply have to say that this one of the best, if not the best, interpretations of the human mind that I've ever read. Period. I thank you much for creating this story.
Asitha chapter 16 . 7/24/2007
It's 4 in the morning and I'm too tired to write a proper review, so I'm just going to say that I love it, and it's going on my faves list. _
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