|Reviews for underground|
| Lami chapter 7 . 4/6/2003
oh please let him be there in the morning! i love how confused and fucked up their inner diolouge is, it's wonderful and hilarious and um... write more:)
| MizMalfoy chapter 7 . 4/5/2003
this is amazing! I love it! Please continue!
| colaqueen chapter 7 . 4/5/2003
| whohasthezebra chapter 6 . 4/3/2003
That was incredibly wellwritten and i love jaisyn! wowzers, i really cant say much besides the fact that your angst mixes well with a brand of bitter humor all of its own. id love to visit their shop, and i like nathen. everything is confused, just like everything truly is. rock on, you!
| lifeboats chapter 6 . 4/3/2003
usually when i find a story i really love, i would say "this is one of the best stories i've ever read." in this case i'm going to say "This IS the best story i've ever read". I'm in complete awe of your style. I love the idea, the storyline so far as for the characters... i think jaisyn's beautiful, you portray him so well. this is going straight onto my favourite stories list. thankyou for making my day...
| demonic-muses chapter 6 . 4/2/2003
I love this story.. :D and i like nate ALOT ! lol.. hes funny.. so is jay... ! And i found it amusing when he was all " but the...and the... oh shit." i cracked up... hehe...
UPDATE! ::prods you with pitchfork:: UPDATE! please?
| DaSheep chapter 6 . 4/1/2003
Omg! that was so, sexy... *bliss*
can't wait fa more
| jd chapter 6 . 3/31/2003
awesome. i'm so glad i found this story, it's really good!
| Tin Whistle chapter 6 . 3/31/2003
Wow, that was... really something. I read the whole story in one sitting, and I have to say it's fantastic!
| Aldura chapter 6 . 3/30/2003
Wow. Just wow. It was a stroke of the best luck imaginable that I found this story! I hope that you update soon.
| redredredred chapter 6 . 3/30/2003
AH! so good! you can't leave it there!0_o me want more! ;; i adore this story, the way you write is just, wow! please, please, PLEASE update soon! i can't wait that long for another chapter!
| rallenta chapter 6 . 3/30/2003
-'- a pile of blathering fangirl mush-'- Hot...so...yum...and the...with the...tongue...hehe...jealousy...o what does Jaisyn REALLY do to him? O I am intrigued more than ever. That was wonderful though. Wow. Thanks.
| Flyet chapter 5 . 3/29/2003
I must say that I agree YOU ARE EVIL for leaving it that way!
| ssjbookgirl chapter 5 . 3/27/2003
you are evil! that was not the best place leave it was vary good! i want more!
| Rockfamous chapter 5 . 3/26/2003
Love it! Absolutely love it! It is really cool, and I just love Nathen. He is too good to be true. Please write more, I'm begging you )