Wow! At every moment i have been captivated by this story. I stayed up till 3am reading it i was so enthralled. The characters were real and they touched me deeply, especially Nathan. I am so happy that i read this story! Thankyou

sure took me a long time to read. So happy for both of them.

i'm just reading this right now and it sounds very interesting. You sure write a lot!

I haven't reviewed, or read, this story in a long time but I agree that this was a simple and sweet ending to an extremely confusing story. Next time you write, make sure it isn't too deep. I wasn't sure who was related to who and who loved who, so maybe try to ease down on the...epic-ness of it all. Anyway great story, good job.

cool

Hmm. Dunno if I should be, but I'm slightly nervous 'bout this. Guess I'm just worried for my Jaisyn; Nathen *seems* nice enough, but *still*...

I just noticed that you keep changing tense between past and present; is that on purpose, or an accident?
Well, I can ignore it because this story is still blessed awesome.
Poor Jaisyn.

There are a few typos and spelling/grammar errors every now and then (same in the first chapter), but nothing major. I'm sure most people wouldn't even notice it-I'm just weird like that.
I really liked this chapter! I like these characters muchly so far.
And, I can' believe Jaisyn remembered about his formerly twitching eye! Or rather, I can believe that *he* did, it's just that *I* wouldn't have.

Yes, I suppose it was a bit tedious, but I think it really did do a lot to let us know stuff about Jaisyn.
Y'know... I keep laughing every time I see Kayne and Abe's names next to each other like that. Caine and Able... Or however the Bible-type names are spelled... It just amuses me.
Sorry, I'll shut up and just move on to the next chapter now.

Nice. the ending was just so sweet... someday, i'll read the other stories, k? liked it- it really is one of the better stories that i've found so far.
baibaiyukie

Fantastic! Simple and beautiful, and utterly fulfilling. Yay for them, the sweethearts!

I loved it no other word for it should be made into a book but I do have one little prob you never said what that word ment? in the other lingo you know what I mean and I can't wait to see the other fics I've read many of your fics

I'm both sad and happy. Sad because the story is finished but happy because it was a good end. A very nice end. :)
Can't wait for the side-stories, I'll bet they'll be interesting. :) Until then, adios! ;)

S good! ! ! ! !
Great ending babe, i look forward to readin more of yer stories. and nathan is still my fave char.

i'm sad that it's the end, but it was a really cool story. ) nice writing. yea, please write some more about all the guys! )