Reviews for underground
Tsukinani chapter 14 . 11/5/2003

You can't end it there! C'mon, please put the next chapter up... (gets down on knees and begs) C'mon

Anyway, see ya

We could be gone
Wesley The Dark Prince chapter 14 . 11/2/2003
Well I geuss that was okay, not as good as the others but still good. I think the chapter was grammatically incorrect, but whatever it's your story.
futagoat02 chapter 14 . 11/1/2003
Omg, you gotta update soon! horrible way to end, you're right. you are evil... and the truth is free to do your bidding! like it, love it, update soon!

demonic-muses chapter 14 . 10/30/2003
BAH! you are evil! leaving me hanging like that... sheesh...

thanks fer the choco covered nathan tho. hes yummy. .~

Tis an interesting plot twist...

:: prods you with a pitchfork:;

Twisted Revolution chapter 14 . 10/30/2003
That's *really* creepy. I mean it. Totally. *a-hem* I just stared at the screen for like twenty second when Jaisyn reached for his wallet. Thoughts: 'okay, totally not possible, way too predictable, but wait, this is a story, we know it's gonna happen, oh gosh...' then read it and eep. Yeah. Can't wait for more! Don't leave us in the limbo!

~Ann of TR
whohasthezebra chapter 14 . 10/29/2003
MizMalfoy chapter 14 . 10/29/2003
OMG! YOU UPDATED! YAHOO! I've been checking back pretty much everyday these past two months... Thank you thank you! I hope it doesn't take this long next time. It's awesome! I haven't reread the revisements, but I will sometime soon. I love this story! It's my favorite. :)
brokendagger chapter 14 . 10/29/2003
argh, no no no no dont leave me like that!
Nanshi chapter 14 . 10/29/2003
NotEnough chapter 14 . 10/29/2003
Yay! An update! with an evil ending...feh, EVIL.

I'm just glad Nathen didn't keep it from him. Ja, very glad indeed.

Brilliant as always. Update soon :D.
Minnie Souris chapter 14 . 10/29/2003
After all this time, I thought you were never going to finish it. Great chapter,

not read the re worked chapters yet but I willHope the Gaelic is not all my fault, he could have spoken welsh or irish.

Keax chapter 14 . 10/29/2003
*_*; oh no! poor Jaisyn!

You gotta continue this, I'm so glad for this chapter. Good luck!
Lainex chapter 14 . 10/29/2003
*dies* Gah! No... No another cliffhanger! Woe be us readers who love your fic so much! I hope you update soon and put us out of our misery... ;_;
brokendagger chapter 13 . 10/27/2003
Tsukinani chapter 13 . 10/23/2003
Heya Slip,

Love the story from the bottom of my heart. Is it possible for an update soon? Please?

Love it anyway.

We could be gone
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