NO!

You can't end it there! C'mon, please put the next chapter up... (gets down on knees and begs) C'mon

Anyway, see ya

We could be gone

Well I geuss that was okay, not as good as the others but still good. I think the chapter was grammatically incorrect, but whatever it's your story.

Omg, you gotta update soon! horrible way to end, you're right. you are evil... and the truth is free to do your bidding! like it, love it, update soon!

baibaiyukie

BAH! you are evil! leaving me hanging like that... sheesh...

thanks fer the choco covered nathan tho. hes yummy. .~

Tis an interesting plot twist...

:: prods you with a pitchfork:;

UPDATE!

That's *really* creepy. I mean it. Totally. *a-hem* I just stared at the screen for like twenty second when Jaisyn reached for his wallet. Thoughts: 'okay, totally not possible, way too predictable, but wait, this is a story, we know it's gonna happen, oh gosh...' then read it and eep. Yeah. Can't wait for more! Don't leave us in the limbo!

~Ann of TR

NATHEN!

OMG! YOU UPDATED! YAHOO! I've been checking back pretty much everyday these past two months... Thank you thank you! I hope it doesn't take this long next time. It's awesome! I haven't reread the revisements, but I will sometime soon. I love this story! It's my favorite. :)

argh, no no no no dont leave me like that!

EVIL! _ ROAR!

Yay! An update! with an evil ending...feh, EVIL.

I'm just glad Nathen didn't keep it from him. Ja, very glad indeed.

Brilliant as always. Update soon :D.

After all this time, I thought you were never going to finish it. Great chapter,

not read the re worked chapters yet but I willHope the Gaelic is not all my fault, he could have spoken welsh or irish.

Mary

*_*; oh no! poor Jaisyn!

You gotta continue this, I'm so glad for this chapter. Good luck!

*dies* Gah! No... No another cliffhanger! Woe be us readers who love your fic so much! I hope you update soon and put us out of our misery... ;_;

MORE A I LOVE THIS STORRY

Heya Slip,

Love the story from the bottom of my heart. Is it possible for an update soon? Please?

Love it anyway.

We could be gone