Reviews for underground
demonic-muses chapter 13 . 10/13/2003
A ! ! ! I WANT MORE! !

update soon. purdy please? make yer muses cooperate?

:: prods you with a pitchfork::

Keax chapter 13 . 9/13/2003
wow. sounds like it's getting complex.

love it. please continue!
Jess chapter 13 . 9/3/2003
I'm so completely in love with this story. ;_; It is so wonderful. I sincerly hope you update it soon because if you don't, I might die... XD

Wow. Amazing.

You're a wondeful writer! Keep up the fantastic work! XD
futagoat02 chapter 13 . 8/31/2003
OMG, i love this story! i think it's sweet but annoying how nathen is so possesive, and Jaisyn is kawaii! like it, love it, update soon!

1UnderGroundFan chapter 13 . 8/31/2003
whohasthezebra chapter 13 . 8/31/2003
i love this story. It is the most well written thing i have read in a very, very very long time. Fantastic, i love nathen and jaisyn...poor guys are so fucked up. Rock on!
firess chapter 10 . 8/31/2003
"“You’re more tired then I thought.”"

tis than. then refers to time-like events. good chapter though!
firess chapter 6 . 8/31/2003
"Slowly, thickly, I got out of the car, barely supporting myself on shaky legs as I reached down and pulled on my jeans and boxers, wincing at the wetness left behind by our actions."

shouldnt one put boxers on before putting jeans on? this is a good story so far though.
Aranya chapter 9 . 8/30/2003
hey I LOVE this story! It's addicting, I was so mad yesterday when I couldn't read more because the site was dealing with an overload. Your characters are awesome,especially Nathen. Another thing that I like is the Gaelic, I'm irish and I've always loved the language, hopefully some day I'll be able to learn it and speak it fluently.
firess chapter 5 . 8/30/2003
i thought his hand was all bloody and crap from hitting the wall with it...
Wesley The Dark Prince chapter 7 . 8/30/2003
Wow, my first review, I feel special. Anyways, the story is great as usual. You should really change the name of it though, or the description because it doesn't have anything to do with the story.
Bottledinsideme chapter 13 . 8/27/2003
Its a bit confusing for me because I don't have the details from the earlier chapters fresh in my head. Wow...this is going to make things complicated for Nathan and Jaisyn. Good chapter.
Ayakaishi Fei chapter 13 . 8/27/2003
I like it. The characters are interesting, and you have a very different storyline. Can't wait to see the next chapter - nice job so far.
MizMalfoy chapter 13 . 8/26/2003
Please, please, please update soon! I love this story so much! I want more! :-D
Purged Account chapter 13 . 8/26/2003
Oh sweet jesus, you updated at last. I've waited so long. I'm glad you continued. And don't worry, I wasn't confused, that chapter was fine.

I can't wait for more. Please keep writing.
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