Reviews for underground |
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Shusuke chapter 5 . 8/25/2003 REALLY REALLY LIKE thsi story! Pls dun keep in suspense, want to know how NAthen is going to lie to Jaisyn and how he will find out abthis parentage not to mention more loving* |
Twisted Revolution chapter 13 . 8/25/2003 Hey! Great job! I like Nathen's POV, it gives it a semi-more-entertaining perspective. But that's prolly b/c I'm so used to Jaisyn's. *shrugs* You may like one of my own stories. . ."Twilight Rein". It's an action/adventure/romance thing. (het and s-a) Me and Katy (we co-write it) think it's pretty good. I'm done w/ the shameless plug, now. |
NotEnough chapter 13 . 8/25/2003 Bloody hell. I never saw that coming. I mean, the name was always weird...but that never even crossed my mind. Wow. I'm glad he beat the shit out of Jake. He bloody deserved it. But, now you gotta update soon so i can read what happens next. I want more dammit. Update soon. Please. Pretty please. |
Anoyo chapter 12 . 8/23/2003 Wow. I didn't believe you could shove all the fucked-up aspects of reality into one story. This is an accomplishment. Seriously. Very very good story. The characters are very believable, realistic, and non-stereotypical. That's always good. I like the way you title the chapters, too. It gives it more of a rough sense. The feeling I get from this fic is rough in itself; like this is the rough end of reality. It gives off this vibe that screams for pity but throws it away as well. I greatly look forward to your next chapter; I'm sure it will be. . .eventful. Can't wait till it's out. Ann |
Drizzle chapter 12 . 8/21/2003 this is so wonderful! -i mean the story... not the Jaisyn getting beat up :D |
We could be gone chapter 12 . 8/18/2003 Heya, love the story, please keep writing, I'm desperate to find out what happens to Jake, you can't leave it like this. Pwease? |
Nanshi chapter 12 . 8/17/2003 EGG-CELLENT STORY! Can't wait until U update so I can read Jake having his ass kicked! |
Flyet chapter 12 . 7/28/2003 YAY! JAKE IS IN TROUBLE! NATHENS POV NEXT! The world could not be a better place. |
succubusbroad chapter 12 . 7/26/2003 I loved this chapter... please update soon. |
Lika chapter 12 . 7/26/2003 nathan's comments about jake in chapter 12 make me wonder about his motivations. it makes me think that jake is the lesser of two evils: the hench man of sorts. i'm excited to see how this ends and i'm eager to see what nathan does. keep up the good work. i see little wrong. if anything, proof read a little more for simple spelling and gramatical errors. |
Bottledinsideme chapter 12 . 7/21/2003 Wow...finally its out...ok I got a glimpse who Jake is...manager for Nathen's band? or something like that? Good chapter...at least now its out in the open and Jaisyn didn't break up with Nathen. |
Bottledinsideme chapter 11 . 7/21/2003 Who's Jake? I don't remember at all...and when I read back to the other chapters, I am still lost...cuz all i read was a lot of sex. Anyhows, why is Jake beating Jaisyn up? I'm so lost. |
Hey Beautiful Day chapter 12 . 7/16/2003 I just finished this story. I'm not sure how I came across it. It's SO HARD to find good stories on here and I want to thank you for writing one of the best. And it's not even done yet! That means you have some work to do... :p |
MizMalfoy chapter 12 . 7/15/2003 I love this story so much! it just gets better and better. Please continue! |
Kaerith chapter 12 . 7/13/2003 Unexpected plot twist in chapter 11. I'm anxiously awaiting to see Nathan's POV and hope that he kicks Jake's butt! REVENGE, REVENGE! |