Reviews for underground
LoveSasa chapter 12 . 7/10/2003
Oh dear God in heaven.. Thank you.

I just hope Jaisyn is okay.

~Sasa
Beth chapter 12 . 7/10/2003
you have to write more! lol i love this story
Nightmare Wolf chapter 12 . 7/8/2003
*bounces* I want more!
whohasthezebra chapter 12 . 7/8/2003
Jake is a bloody bastard and should be taken to with a baseball bat. rock on, this was sad, but im happy at the end. hah, you are one of the greatest writers on this site, i love the way you describe everything in incredible detail, from their affection to the awful trouncing that he just got. rock on.
Saint Anger chapter 12 . 7/7/2003
oh my dear lord.

i think i'm in love with this story.

this is just...beyond-words awesome. you've got incredible characters, a great plot, and absolutely stunning descriptions...

eep. i'm almost speechless. but i have enough coherency to say that i absolutely LOVE this story, it's going on my favorite's list, and that i'll be waiting for the next chapter with bated breath. :-D
alyssa chapter 12 . 7/6/2003
GAWD!

you are a GAWD! if any thing one can sort through all the junk on here, but to find something actualy worth reading. you're a great writer and you've got me hooked. ((you've probably heard that a hundred times already.)) please keep with this story. i'm giddy over it. i love jaisyn! i love nathan! i want them to have babies!
Jennifer L. Rawles chapter 12 . 7/6/2003
way cool more please
peregrineme chapter 12 . 7/6/2003
This is one of my absolute favorite stories. I check it everyday to see if you've updated it. Keep writing, please.
Rachel chapter 12 . 7/3/2003
...PLEASE tell me Nathan kicks his ass... BAD JAKE!
klara2131 chapter 12 . 7/3/2003
yo yo yo, i'v just discaver the story and liked it. alot

keep going:)
Rockfamous chapter 12 . 7/2/2003
Oh thank god you're alive! I thought you'd never update again! Anyway, really really good chapter, and I'm expecting a lot more! Please continue! Loving it!
Shades chapter 4 . 7/2/2003
heh, Kay's a funny drunk. An ass, yeah, but still funny. m . . .nathan. . . .m . . .jay. I loved the chap, Nathan soo good for jay. keep it up!

/shades\\
Shades chapter 3 . 7/2/2003
im to lazy to sign in again . . .anyway, I LOVE JAY! He's so friggin sweet, and he actually **cares**. and he's hot! I have a weakness for dreds . . .and piercings. **wipes mouth** I love the way the story's playing out. Lots of plot, not just your everyday pwp or anything. Loved it!

/Shades\\
Shades chapter 3 . 7/2/2003
im to lazy to sign in again . . .anyway, I LOVE JAI
discordlives chapter 12 . 7/2/2003
OMG! I gotta know what happens next!
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