Reviews for Could we
nolongerhere357 chapter 1 . 9/16/2003
Lots of questions without any answers!

"Could we get past this past?" - my favorite line. I love using the same word for more than one meaning, especially together like that when it makes sense to.

"Could I learn to be loved?" - the only one with 2 question marks, even. ::sigh:: some people just don't know what it is to be loved, it's true... and sad. I am thinking of one female in particular who I come close to smothering with genuine love, and she has no clue, because to her, love is being mistreated and looked down upon.

Hmm, I should write a poem about it...
Starlight Maiden chapter 1 . 9/16/2003
I think the last line is the best, just tops it all off.
CrystalDreamer620 chapter 1 . 5/1/2003
insightful...and rhyming...and just about everything you could ever want in a poem. keep it up!
not sure yet chapter 1 . 3/19/2003
interesting, i like it though, has an air of mystery about it, nicely done
Silently Audible chapter 1 . 3/8/2003
Great poem! I like the questioning style of the poem and the use of the internal rhymes, and genrally a good piece of work :)

P.S thanks for reviewing all my works.
Sakura Urimeshi chapter 1 . 3/8/2003
Well it's pretty obvious I like poetry otherwise I would'nt be here. I'm an avid writer myself and as a fellow poet, KUDOS TO YOU! _keep up the fantastic work!