|Reviews for A Simple Twist Of Fate|
| Key Belle chapter 15 . 8/11/2009
Okay, here we go...
1. Lunar Stellaris of Earth
2. Paradise Valley
3. Scout Nimbus Windfall
1. Cytosine Starlia of Light
2. He read the stories of King Arthur and convinced himself he was a knight
3. A Raccoon
4. To catch fish
1. Shadow - New Moon, Light - Full Moon, Wind - Crescent Moon, Fire - Waning Gibbous Moon, Earth - First Half, Water - Second Half
2. Uh... shoot, and I was on a roll, too... uhm, that the chant unlocks her memories? Or that she can understand it at all? Maybe...
3. Zephyr Whitewind of Wind, Misty Rivercat of Water, Cliff Rockclimber of Earth, Pyro Flash of Fire, Midnight Tunneldark of Shadow, and Cynthia Starla of Light.
There... did I win?
Excellent story. I'm looking forward to reading more!
Keep on keepin' on!
| nightdragon0 chapter 14 . 4/2/2005
It's a very nice story I'll say. Another thing is that is shows both sides of the conflict and violence (dragon and felida)...something that probably happens a lot in today's reality.
Oh and having Dravidian and Scout together...those scenes are priceless.
| Nightwolf 006 chapter 14 . 2/27/2005
wow that was..wow what a great story i'm glad i came across it i loved it
| EisoftheSnow chapter 14 . 7/23/2004
Thats such a good story! I can't wait to see the follow up about this new evil! I must say, i was so happy the moment i heard of a wolf-like creature named silver fang! eventhough hes evil, i love it! Hope to read some more of your great stories!
| inralth chapter 14 . 6/26/2004
Oh fudge...I wish I had gotten to this story sooner so I could review each chapter (I don't like to review chapters after the others have been posted) Well, anyway, this is such a wonderful story! Indepth, adventurous...everything that one needs .- Well, as, I said, a great story! Now...off to read your other works because I know they'll be just as good!
| Sanderek chapter 11 . 4/27/2004
First thing. Dravidar should die. Jerk. Anyway, nice chapter. . . lol, other than that depressing end. Poor Dravidian. You better get him back out of that hole! Cytosine will save him, and then Dravidar will feel stupid. Heh heh. I can't wait.
Well, good job, and keep up the good work. Update Aura's defense.
| Sanderek chapter 10 . 4/16/2004
o. . . nice chapter. I really liked it. I think you should go back through this one and edit it a bit, but in all, it was really great. I can't wait to find out what happens, and then, start reading the sequel.
Anyway, good job. Luna is so stupid. . . LOL. He makes me laugh, and Silver is his complete opposite. One question. . . where are they going now? I'm slightly confused. Can't Dravidian just fly home now. . . Artemis fixed his wing, didn't he?
| Sanderek chapter 9 . 4/13/2004
I do declare... it was chilling, thrilling, and outright spooky... and just when I thought the laughing wouldn't end... they kept laughing! Ha! And, then I was laughing because it just wouldn't end. Belle, you're crazy.
Anyway, I loved the scene in the Valley... the fog was so freaky... especially the voices saying "Here... come" That was crazy!
Pretty intense chapter if you ask me.
I'll get to the next chapters sooner or later! Good work.
Also, update Aura's Magic for Spirit Guardian's please. Thanks!
| Quill of Molliemon chapter 14 . 3/18/2004
Wow...that was so cool.
I luv it!
The ending was so nice...well except for the part where the Silver Fang revived and is going off to do evil things...*shivers*
I'm going to go read the sequel now!
| Quill of Molliemon chapter 9 . 3/18/2004
I really like this story. It has a very interesting cast of characters, especially the Cerberus, they sounded Scottish! _
I'll finish this after I go eat my dinner...
| Sanderek chapter 8 . 3/8/2004
Nice Chapter. I finally read it. I wanna get on to PTD... so I've gotta finish this one up.
Anyway, it was good. They're off to the Valley of the Spirits! Woohoo... I wonder how this is gonna end...
| Saimi chapter 1 . 3/3/2004
TWISTS! I LUV TWISTS! hmm...speaking of twists...i just ate twister fries...hahahahaha! good title, better story!
| Senashenta chapter 1 . 2/28/2004
I came across your other story, Perchance To Dream, and was going to read it... but then I read the beginning and saw it was a sequel to this one, so I skipped on over here instead. _~
So! I don't have time to read all of this right now, but it looks like it's going to be a very good read! *adds to favorites* I'll let you know what I think (not that you partiularly care, lol) once I've read a bit more. -
Oh. If you felt like reading my novel-in-progress (Angel Fire) and giving me a bit of an oppinion, it would be muchly appreciated. If not... meh. That's fine too.
I shall return!
| Sanderek chapter 7 . 1/12/2004
Hey, hey hey! Artemis is cooler, but Scout is even cooler!
This probably was your best chapter so far. I especially liked this certain paragraph:
Cytosine knew very little about humans, except that they had left the land many years ago, and there were very few places where the ruins still existed. Cytosine now looked with wonder at the old, abandoned city. It was like a castle-like city you would have imagined in King Arthur's time. Time had not defeated the once proud city yet, though the elements had not left the city unscathed. The castle-like towers still majestically loomed over the land, casting their shadows abroad engulfing much of the forest in them, still acting as silent guardians over the land upon which they were built. Though now they served a different master: The forest. The forest had long since reclaimed the once busy city, covering all the old buildings with the garb of the forest. Ivy like vines curled around the building like snakes, slowly slithering their way up to the top, as though trying to strangle and subdue their prey. Moss-like grass and fallen leaves now littered much of the ground, though one still could make out the now chipped cobblestone road. All the buildings were now riddled with holes and crevices, in which many trees and flowers had sprouted. To Cytosine, the city still looked vastly untamed.
Scout is the coolest. He reminds me of a ruder Squirt from Finding Nemo (even though I know you wrote this way before FN came out). This story's good, and by the amount of chapters left... I'm drawing near to the end :(. Oh well, Perchance to Dream is next on my list *raises fist at you for not posting another chapter of SG up yet*.
Anyway, this was so cool. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Is Dravidian a butterfly or a slimey bus? Who knows (By the way, I liked the analogy).
I'll talk to you later, and keep writing. Also, I couldn't help but notice something about your profile. See ya!
- Sands -
ps. Auara's magic and speed are my main focus for your whole SG, basically, unless I say otherwise.
| Sanderek chapter 6 . 1/3/2004
Nine chapter Belle.
I like the Felida elements thing, and the moon phases. So, is the new moon, the moon for Dark/Shadow Felida? Anyway, it was a good chapter, and Luna wasn't as annoying as he usually is, so I was content.
However, I must have my revenge on you... heh heh heh. All the condemnation that you've given me for the cliffhangers in my Spirit Guardians story, and yet you've done it yourself. Hah! I've caught you in the act. LOL.
Ok, well, I'll be going now. I wonder what's gonna happen to Cytosine. Is she heading for a waterfall? I didn't really get what was happening. Or was the waterfall dropping down to the river where she fell in? Either way, she's in a river.
- Sands -