Eh.

I think things are moving a little fast. Does Gaia honestly expect to just not like Santiago anymore, just because she kissed Milo? That's stupid. You don't do that. You can't do that, no matter how cute a guy is.

Another thing- blonds are NOT all stupid bimbos without anything in the way of brains, and the way you described Viv really bothered me, because I'm blond. And I am not stupid.

Other than that it's a pretty good story, though. I mean, I think if Milo and Gaia's relationship works without a hitch it's pretty unrealistic, but somehow I doubt that'll happen.

Seems you havn't updated for about two years now, but, I think you really have a good storyline and plot (isn't that the same thing?) and i rekon you should finish it! Coz you really do have good writing skills! So please update!

What a situation to be in! I thought Milo was heaps sweet,but then there Santiago, and all i can say is, im glad im not her! Great chapter, that was SO not horrible, that was totally fanspastic!

Stuff Santiago! Gaia and Milo sound like a good couple! Good Chapter! Nice and long, which I like, and if you did that at 3.30 in the morning, thats bloody good!

I'm not really that great at reviewing, but, this chapter was totally great and I can't wait to read more.

goodness...this is pure goodness. u write well and i must say, the story's a little cliche but u've held it well. awesome. UPDATE SOON! I NEED MORE FROM YOU!

I just read the first chapter and I'm addicted! Anyway, great story! I've been searching for decent stories for so long and finally I've found exactly what I'm looking for! The plot is heading a good way and I hope it stays that way! Or maybe even better! Keep up the good work. So far, there aren't any typos or grammatical errors so keep it up! I'm off to read more of your excellent fic now!

gaia is so damned lucky u no tat?~~!
i reckon u should hav da couplings milo and gaia
milo is so cute and sounds intelligent 2
santiago had his chances 2 many by the looks of it but let them all slip away
so shame on him tat now milo and gaia got 2gether and r so happy 2gether he plans on breakin them up
like i said b4
MILO & GAIA 2GETHER 4EVA

oh, forgot to tell you. i really like the style of your writing. detail is great and so is the dialouge. i thought it kinda funny since you use a lot of the same phrases i do when i write. good good good! :D

aww! this is so damn cute! lol, but this is getting good fast. she has to get with santiago! she must, she must! alright im getting all worked up. update it soon!

I LOVE SOFTBALL! WOO HOO! he's gonna "woo" her! Lol!

lol! I wanna know who she picked, and I'll read the next chapter later. Dogma is a funny movie!

lovely lovely lovely. few minor grammatical details, because I obsess over that kind of thing. at one point you say "they stood their awkwardly," the spelling is 'there.' and the dessert you mean has two s-es, as in the 'desert' they were eating from Baskin-Robbins. May I also suggest you identify your speaker a little more often, because when it's just banter like "Sure, great, see you there," I lose track of who's speaking very quickly.

nice little goings-on w/ the plots, the story is developing nicely. plus i like the "young grasshopper" thing for my own reasons. glad to be of help, keep up the good work!

Great Chapter! Finally something good is going to happen, and there will be some major conflict! Gaia is WAY too lucky for her own good.