|Reviews for Diner|
| Kievsky chapter 1 . 3/11/2003
The descriptions are detailed without being overbearing ("peeling dilapidated town-center diner that has burned down even a few times".love that line; Jersey diners are like nowhere else) and the scene is film noir in style and setting. And the way you end it so unresolved; it's sad really, but very true to reality and the subject and the tone of the piece.
I also hope the black eye part isn't true.
| Paradoxical Goddess chapter 1 . 3/9/2003
*sighs* I adore your imagery. (*squeals* The black eye, the black eye, the diner, ah!)
| E. Gao chapter 1 . 3/8/2003
And I assume this is just a scenario, and not based off something that actually happened. Or least I HOPE, because you didn't mention anything about a black eye! *worried now*
hmm, I'm wondering if the teacher is matt. _
laa dee dah. writer's block. (me, at least, humph)