Reviews for In thy Sorrow I Will Kiss thy Tears
AboutAs SubtleAs A FlyingBrick chapter 28 . 1/11/2016
Wait, so Mary the servant is 50 and is considered old? Wtf? My mum is 50 and she looks 40. People don't look that old at 50!
AboutAs SubtleAs A FlyingBrick chapter 27 . 1/11/2016
That's the biggest waste of time to read. Relevance 0. I also don't think anyone would actually write in their diary that detailed when they're only a kid.
Aouregan chapter 2 . 4/5/2015
I've only read a few stories from you, but find that I am hooked to your writing and how you bring your characters to life.

I just have one little question to ask. Why are some parts of your story written in italics?

Other than that, I don't see any other issues and am eager to find out what happens further on into the story!
MileyRowling chapter 108 . 2/12/2015
Great work! I really liked this story!
A. Barone chapter 3 . 1/16/2010
Stories from the past are always interesting, and Elayne's mother sounds to be just as interesting.
A. Barone chapter 2 . 1/16/2010
How very interesting...I like this beginning. Elayne is an intruiging creature already.
A. Barone chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
I know nothing about the crusades, but I love the Middle Ages and I love when these things are fictionalized. I look forward to reading your story.
J chapter 107 . 10/8/2009
I'm am stoked. Really.

As much as I hate tragedies, this was fabulous. It ended on a good note and I'm glad it ended the way it has.
daydee chapter 108 . 7/13/2009
wow. this was an awesome story. and you were only 14.
Tomoka chapter 107 . 4/26/2008
I'm so surprised you don't have more reviews and I can honestly say it IS one of the best stories I've ever read. It made me cry! Not even published novels make me cry as much as I did when I read this. It was like a rollercoaster ride I wouldn't mind going on again, although it made me sad that Mortenez died, but to be honest it added to the wonderfusl story.

I adore historical stories (even if they aren't historically correct) and I absolutely love this story so much! I praise you and your talent.

One thing I really like is that your characters have flaws and I as the reader can see them

As a little side note... I wanted to know... what happened to Claude? He seemed to disappear after he was kidnapped, whether this was intentional or not, I am not sure, but I am curious
Carrie chapter 108 . 11/30/2007
Oh my goodness.

You have no idea how much the story resounded in my heart. Ah...

It's amazing.

I loved it. In the beginning, it was a bit slow and hard to connect with, but with each chapter your ability to warm up to your characters grew and grew. By the end, I was having to hold back tears.

I cannot believe you were fourteen when you wrote this. Unbelievable. Great talent.

Someday, consider publishing- I believe you can make it.

Excellent Work,

unknown chapter 88 . 2/6/2007
I would just like to mention that Mary Magdalene was not Jesus' mother, she was the one he drove the demons out of and forgave.
siddika chapter 107 . 1/20/2007
Simply excellent.
Kohlomere chapter 11 . 11/27/2006
I adore this story! The characters are precious. But wait a second, but didn't you say earlier that Elayne was born during the Fourth Crusade? Then how could she be in her twenties during the Third?
Written chapter 5 . 3/6/2006
None too bad so far!
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