Reviews for The Present, A Story of Tranquility |
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![]() ![]() ![]() hey, tranquility is ruled by young people -_-;; madi is 12, caed is 15.. aren't there any old elders guiding? |
![]() ![]() ![]() ahh, madison is some future fortune-teller! ahha, and what's with michael? btw, she's twelve, but in eighth grade? super smart! |
![]() ![]() ![]() good story t'sa, lol, did i review already? anyways, cold limenade tastes nasty, esp if you don't have sugar! / |
![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter...I loved the talks, mostlyu because nearly everything or really everything is true...I love that...telling the truth...Update soon... Sayonara ~~Silv~~ |
![]() ![]() can't wait for more! update soon! |
![]() ![]() hmm... great chapter..i'm going to read the next one now! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting chapter. I like it. So please hurry with the next chapter, k? Sayonara ~~Silv~~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. didn't see any mistakes. Hope to see more soon... Sayonara ~~Silv~~ |
![]() ![]() ooh! another new chapter! i really love this story! update soon k/ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story so far. It's interesting and makes me want to know more. I haven't had time to read the whole thing but I definitely will! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it! This is a great chapter, and so much of it is so true! So keep on writing, you have a good story here, so keep up the great work! Sayonara ~~Silv~~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() tis really really good. sorry for the short review,i'm eating and typing with only one finger... sayonara ~~silv~~ |
![]() ![]() ooh! this story's so cool! pls post soon! i can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was good! I've gotta go off internet now, so this'll be the last review for today, but tommorow I'll come back and review! ~Autumngold |
![]() ![]() ![]() THIS STORY IS THE BEST! I LOVELOVELOVE IT! It also has a lot pf freaky coincidences. 1: Madison acts like me. (apart from magic powers, but what I wiouldn't give to have 'em!) 2: I'm 13 years old. 3: My star sign is Sagittarious. hehehehe! |