Reviews for The Present, A Story of Tranquility
skyesque chapter 3 . 7/27/2003
hey, tranquility is ruled by young people -_-;; madi is 12, caed is 15.. aren't there any old elders guiding?
skyesque chapter 2 . 7/27/2003
ahh, madison is some future fortune-teller! ahha, and what's with michael? btw, she's twelve, but in eighth grade? super smart!
skyesque chapter 1 . 7/27/2003
good story t'sa, lol, did i review already? anyways, cold limenade tastes nasty, esp if you don't have sugar! /
Silver Magiccraft chapter 12 . 7/1/2003
great chapter...I loved the talks, mostlyu because nearly everything or really everything is true...I love that...telling the truth...Update soon...


SJ chapter 11 . 6/24/2003
can't wait for more! update soon!
SJ chapter 10 . 6/24/2003

great chapter..i'm going to read the next one now!
Silver Magiccraft chapter 11 . 6/24/2003
Interesting chapter. I like it. So please hurry with the next chapter, k?


Silver Magiccraft chapter 9 . 5/23/2003
Great chapter. didn't see any mistakes. Hope to see more soon...


SJ chapter 8 . 5/18/2003
ooh! another new chapter! i really love this story! update soon k/
shadowed memory chapter 2 . 5/17/2003
I really like this story so far. It's interesting and makes me want to know more. I haven't had time to read the whole thing but I definitely will!
Silver Magiccraft chapter 8 . 5/17/2003
I like it! This is a great chapter, and so much of it is so true! So keep on writing, you have a good story here, so keep up the great work!


Silver Magiccraft chapter 7 . 5/5/2003
tis really really good. sorry for the short review,i'm eating and typing with only one finger...


SJ chapter 5 . 4/8/2003
ooh! this story's so cool! pls post soon! i can't wait to read more!
Shades Of Autumn chapter 4 . 4/4/2003
This chapter was good!

I've gotta go off internet now, so this'll be the last review for today, but tommorow I'll come back and review!

Shades Of Autumn chapter 3 . 4/4/2003

It also has a lot pf freaky coincidences.

1: Madison acts like me. (apart from magic powers, but what I wiouldn't give to have 'em!)

2: I'm 13 years old.

3: My star sign is Sagittarious.

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