|Reviews for The Prize|
| marylynx chapter 11 . 4/9/2015
Hi, dear author! I like you story so much! I have read all of the eleven chapters and I was really excited! I do not know, why you think that last chapter is worse than others. It seemed interesting for me! Why does everyone keep saying that it is the last chapter? I suppose that the story has just developed.
| Petals-and-Tears chapter 11 . 4/18/2009
Perhaps you are going to leave this story unfinished after all it has been SIX years but I found this story as I was flipping thru Fictionpress and I really like it . . .
In fact I would really like to know what happens
plz continue it
| D. Wilder chapter 11 . 9/7/2006
I have to admit...I've never had the urge to read any suspense/adventure stories on this site. But your story is very appealing. I like the characters and I most definitely like the plot. Please keep going, I will be waiting!
| Finch chapter 11 . 2/4/2006
So how old are you exactly? :)
I mean, writing is my life, and I'm 17 and find it hard to string an essay introduction together - and im an A grade A level student!
I read fictionpress A LOT - and you're the second story to ever get my praise. I'm critical, and even though you seem young you're bloody amazing. Reading through this (I just found it and read it all the way through - took me an hour and 10 mins!) you really remind me of JK Rowling or Anthony Horowitz's writing styles. :)
You really impress me - update.
| naz chapter 11 . 2/2/2006
i love the story, which ones the bad guy, A.J or Chase? pleese finish to the end, im saying this because some authors go half way through their stories and dont finish it, even though they are still getting reviews.
| Megan Jacobson chapter 11 . 1/6/2006
It's gonna be A.J., isn't it? He's saying Chase is crazy, but Chase has been warning Danielle since the beginning.
| Megan Jacobson chapter 10 . 1/6/2006
Jeez, a mansion of death. I can see why everyone wants to go there. Danielle and Luke better watch their backs.
| Megan Jacobson chapter 4 . 1/6/2006
Oh... So is Chase the bad guy? Or is it A.J.? Or it the security guy? Or maybe, just maybe, it'll turn out to be nerdy little Luke. I'll have to keep reading to find out.
| Megan Jacobson chapter 3 . 1/6/2006
See! Luke's trying to get himself killed already, and it's only Chapter 3! *Shakes head* But seriously here, it's a solid story. I like it.
| Megan Jacobson chapter 2 . 1/6/2006
Ah... bet Luke and Danielle will be our only survivors. Am I right? Or maybe Luke'll die tragically in Danielle's arms while she sobs... Sorry, *slaps self* never mind. Great job. I want to read more.
| Megan Jacobson chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
Ah, poor Danielle. Doesn't she realize that the mansions are ALWAYS haunted? But anyway, you've done a good job, it's clearly written and precise.
| Hi chapter 11 . 11/14/2005
Ah it's been TWO YEARS and youd idn't finish the story. Can you please finish it? :-(
| Sally-andersonn chapter 1 . 9/29/2005
When are you going to continue this? THIs is so gripping.
| a common mistake chapter 11 . 9/12/2005
Intriguing story, I've got to admit it's pretty original and I love the suspense... which at the moment is eating away at me because I can't figure out who killed who and who's the bad guy... and the good guy... But I love it. Excellent story, can't wait for the update!
| Lily of the Shadow chapter 11 . 9/4/2005
This is very interesting, I look forward to more!
That was interesting, bringing up Chase with AJ. I was half-expecting him to be a ghost! Although... I'm fairly convinced that Luke's 'girlfriend' is the 16-year-old who drowned with her mother. I know that Luke feels that she's corporeal, but... She's still rather suspicious to me.
Anyway, like I said, this is really interesting!