|Reviews for Set Of Monster Ballards|
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/10/2003
why did i read it? why oh why?
| a.k.a.oprah chapter 1 . 3/10/2003
Well, it was a nice idea aside from the sex part.
However, can we say not living in reality? It's highly unlikely that 2 people will meet have sex, and get married the next tour stop.
It was also not well written. The plot moved way too fast, your grammar wasn't correct, and the whole thing was utterly ridiculous.
Nice try tho. Keep working on it.