aw, that was so sad! I'm sorry about your dog :( Sometimes pets feel like they're part of the family and it's hard to lose them. I really liked the emotion behind this poem, and it had a nice flow to it, nice job!

Aww... soo sad. You nearly made me cry! :'( Aww, that effect on me! :O Amazing! I'm soo sorry about your dog! Dogs aren't just dogs... they're your best friends! :)

Keep writing,

~Vnomi~

I can relate a doggie is a family member and it tears your heart out. Excellent! Keep writing...

That was awesome! Beautiful! *claps* I liked your Rhyming. Very strong! If you used more voice and word choice it be even greater! Keep up the good work!

You really expressed my feelings when my grandfather died. And there is NOTHING wrong with being sad of a dog's death. If my dog died, I'd . You write very well, keep it up!