|Reviews for in which cavemen discover selfawareness|
| Happi Froggi chapter 1 . 3/16/2004
HAHAHA! I think about this a lot, and it is so amusing to finally see a poem about it. Heehee... this is awesome.
| Rachel Peterson chapter 1 . 10/11/2003
uum...my head hurts
*sob* I'm so confused!
| Lee Harvey Kennedy chapter 1 . 7/8/2003
Now this was a cute little poem. Very funny wordplay! It's certainly a breath of fresh air from the multitudes of "I'm so alone/ My heart is breaking/ Bitter, twisted, wordless betrayal" poems that seem to be everywhere.
As a grammar whore, it did bother me when I saw a few lines that didn't have the quotation marks, and there were a few other mistakes, but they didn't detract from the overall effect of this poem. Once again, nice job.
| Jaganashi chapter 1 . 3/15/2003
| Bubblewrapped chapter 1 . 3/12/2003
LOL LOL Oh thank you thank you that cracked me up. Some of the other poems I'd just been reading were depressing, but this one is so funny! I love the rhyme scheme too. Really made me laugh. K/Writing!
| Author Unknown1 chapter 1 . 3/12/2003
A bit of a grammer concern with the figuring out of who is thinking and saying what but the premise is hilarious and true. Sentience is the first sign of good job. It made me smile.