Reviews for While You Were Sleeping
Affair chapter 1 . 4/7/2012
That's so cute and lovey-dovey XD
tiffany chapter 1 . 5/14/2003
thats so romantic. wonderfully said.
s-pannrada chapter 1 . 3/19/2003
This is really good work. I love it.
Adam Lysander chapter 1 . 3/17/2003
Thats such a sweet story! *grins* And I think you should end it there. Going on would ruin it. Its perfect as it is.

-Adam
mabry chapter 1 . 3/16/2003
Thats Hot! in a non-sexual kinda way.
hannah chapter 1 . 3/12/2003
thats deep
Jabari Cosby chapter 1 . 3/12/2003
Hi Kim! This is Jabari, your road dog as you know already. I think your story is great in a gurly kind of way, but me as a male, I want sex in your story. As you know I am a freak, but I think you should finish the story off with some hard core sex or just some drama, I like dramas. I hope you become famous with your excellent rated pg. stories and then I can say you know we so we can chill on your yott. Did I spell that wrong? Holla LOVE, PEACE, AND SOUL -Jabari