Reviews for Traveling Soldier
Lady Emerald1984 chapter 1 . 3/15/2004
It's good. I'm writing something based on the same song but it's so totally different. I hope you get a chance to read it.
Immoral Beloved chapter 1 . 7/9/2003
The one tiny flaw I see with your story besides the fact that it's pretty simple.

At the beginning you mention the setting: * Setting * somewhere around WWII

The song takes place during the conflict in Vietnam. An honest mistake...save for the fact you copied the lyrics down and they mention Vietnam expressly.

Please elaborate using your own gift of creation and...look lively honey, dont make a fool of yourself.
Sira Morgan chapter 1 . 5/25/2003
Nope, he didn't die. Someone she was related to. Or is this a twsit? Where you're supposed to think one thing, but it's really quite the opposite? Now I have quite confused myself!

Good, though!
Lark Olivia chapter 1 . 3/18/2003
Just some info. Travelin' Soldier is not a Dixie Chicks song. But the lyrics are correct because they did change it some for their own version. Although different from the original, the lyrics are correct.
Syvancatak chapter 1 . 3/15/2003
She repleced the ribbon because she was mourning and red symbolizes innocence, she probably felt she was no longer innocent.
Mikey chapter 1 . 3/12/2003
I think you may have gotten some of the song lyrics wrong.