Reviews for Death
R. Blade chapter 1 . 1/16/2004
coolness. i really like ur stuff! ::sallutes::... ::slaps self for being stupid like that::
scars
gaelicWizard chapter 1 . 8/14/2003
ouch.

iLike, I can feel her pain
Steven Hildreth Jr chapter 1 . 7/30/2003
I'm not sure exactly what the whole poem was about, except I can see two people committing suicide, except one accidentally kills the other, then kills themself. Well, it's still good nonetheless. When the full story registers in my thick skull, I'll let you know. :)

Steven Hildreth, Jr.

Fort Huachuca, AZ

July 30, 2003
locke huntsley chapter 1 . 3/12/2003
hmm. very nice description. the metaphors were good. making sure i got it (otherwise, your metaphors sucked :D), the speaker slit his wrists, and it was as though he had driven a knife into the heart of the other person, right?

beautiful, really.
Outlawed Angel of Death chapter 1 . 3/12/2003
this one a little confusing but good