::snorts:: Well duh there isn't a point. It's pure and senseless humor without falling action and conclusion. It leaves you hanging.

I love it!

I love everything I write and none of it is 'crap' in my eyes or the eyes of my 'fans'.

Thank you very much. I am quite happy with how i wrote.

Humorous, all be a touch confusing in parts, you've got a good rhyming scheme going. It was kind of cute, a funny narrative.

I think your poem has no meaning, its boring and doesnt rhyme. It's one of the worst things i've ever heard. You should get a better teacher.

haha that was great reminds me of when i fell asleep after a math test and the bell rang and i didnt hear it...wow that was a day lol great poem though keep writing!

hehehe, my favorite line is... 'Wait a moment,' I looked around me. 'Where are my milk and cookies?'

good poem! :)

Nice Poem. Almost reminds of the time fell asleep in my study hall class. hehe

Nice Poem. Almost reminds of the time fell asleep in my study hall class. hehe

LOL That was excellent! Keep writing!

ooh, what fun! don't quite know what You'll wake up to, eh. tis quite insane and hilarious!

.weird. I would almost venture to say it was poking fun at The Raven, but I'm not sure. I did a parody of that once, it was called The hee. authors_united/the_