Reviews for Sweet Dreams
Catella Estelle chapter 1 . 3/29/2003
::snorts:: Well duh there isn't a point. It's pure and senseless humor without falling action and conclusion. It leaves you hanging.

I love it!

I love everything I write and none of it is 'crap' in my eyes or the eyes of my 'fans'.

Thank you very much. I am quite happy with how i wrote.
Vanessa St. Cloud chapter 1 . 3/27/2003
Humorous, all be a touch confusing in parts, you've got a good rhyming scheme going. It was kind of cute, a funny narrative.
Stellercrombie chapter 1 . 3/27/2003
I think your poem has no meaning, its boring and doesnt rhyme. It's one of the worst things i've ever heard. You should get a better teacher.
BoarderChick607 chapter 1 . 3/16/2003
haha that was great reminds me of when i fell asleep after a math test and the bell rang and i didnt hear it...wow that was a day lol great poem though keep writing!
imacupcake chapter 1 . 3/14/2003
hehehe, my favorite line is... 'Wait a moment,' I looked around me. 'Where are my milk and cookies?'

good poem! :)
Sora21 chapter 1 . 3/14/2003
Nice Poem. Almost reminds of the time fell asleep in my study hall class. hehe
Sora21 chapter 1 . 3/14/2003
Nice Poem. Almost reminds of the time fell asleep in my study hall class. hehe
Needa S chapter 1 . 3/13/2003
LOL That was excellent! Keep writing!
N47R3 chapter 1 . 3/12/2003
ooh, what fun! don't quite know what You'll wake up to, eh. tis quite insane and hilarious!
Saranacian Freak chapter 1 . 3/12/2003
.weird. I would almost venture to say it was poking fun at The Raven, but I'm not sure. I did a parody of that once, it was called The hee. authors_united/the_