|Reviews for The Obsession That Kills|
| Rhoddrin chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
Like how it rhymes and how the story goes further but keeps going on about just the same thing, never losing it's touch. Good that is :)
| A Painter of Poems chapter 1 . 3/23/2005
keep living even if it's only to please me with your poetry. your work is so awesome. i like how you didn't say say what the obsession was. keeps it general so that everyone can relate.
| DameNoire chapter 1 . 11/27/2004
Very nice! I'm so jealous, I'm seeing green. No really. How do you do that?
| SleepDontWeep chapter 1 . 7/12/2004
not my fave of urs but still pretty decent! lov ya xx
| Raven Monarch chapter 1 . 6/14/2004
i wont lie by saying one day it will all be alright... but one day you will have that sweet death we all seek so badly, and may peace find u in ur endless slumber...
| Ali de Lioncourt chapter 1 . 4/15/2004
WOW the poetry is your fort, man
it's rather good... the words and stuff u made good use of that...
well, im leaving
| hateselfhate chapter 1 . 4/12/2004
I went through the same deal man... Sucks huh? Well wait till you become like me... it just gets worse, then it gets better again... Trust me.
| Fyre-Siren chapter 1 . 9/21/2003
And stay alive u ahve much to give!
| affinitas chapter 1 . 7/14/2003
This is a master piece of work. I love the rhythm of the poem! Keep it up!
| XxFrozenFlamExX chapter 1 . 6/23/2003
I don't really understand what *obsession* you are talking about, but never the less, it is quite good..you still shoud've hinted more to what it was...
| sar.h chapter 1 . 6/3/2003
I like it. I think everyone has an obsession like that at some time or another. Smoking, EATING DISORDERS, self-mutilation...and the list goes on and on. Good work. Keep it up.
| DrowningSin32 chapter 1 . 6/1/2003
This was great! Reminds me of my life...I'm not sure what the obsession you wrote of was about, but mine was a boy...
Keep up the fantastic work
| Bob n Kazzi chapter 1 . 5/4/2003
Wow. That's...heartfelt. Is that just a poem, or are you basing it on real life or something?
| RavenPhoenix chapter 1 . 4/30/2003
wow... is this about drug/alcohol addiction?
| Winter Evoleht chapter 1 . 3/27/2003
hm...what was this 'obsession'? good poem.