Reviews for The Obsession That Kills |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Like how it rhymes and how the story goes further but keeps going on about just the same thing, never losing it's touch. Good that is :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() keep living even if it's only to please me with your poetry. your work is so awesome. i like how you didn't say say what the obsession was. keeps it general so that everyone can relate. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice! I'm so jealous, I'm seeing green. No really. How do you do that? -x- DameNoire |
![]() ![]() ![]() not my fave of urs but still pretty decent! lov ya xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() i wont lie by saying one day it will all be alright... but one day you will have that sweet death we all seek so badly, and may peace find u in ur endless slumber... Sincerely |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW the poetry is your fort, man it's rather good... the words and stuff u made good use of that... well, im leaving BYE |
![]() ![]() ![]() I went through the same deal man... Sucks huh? Well wait till you become like me... it just gets worse, then it gets better again... Trust me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() And stay alive u ahve much to give! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a master piece of work. I love the rhythm of the poem! Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't really understand what *obsession* you are talking about, but never the less, it is quite good..you still shoud've hinted more to what it was... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it. I think everyone has an obsession like that at some time or another. Smoking, EATING DISORDERS, self-mutilation...and the list goes on and on. Good work. Keep it up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was great! Reminds me of my life...I'm not sure what the obsession you wrote of was about, but mine was a boy... Keep up the fantastic work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. That's...heartfelt. Is that just a poem, or are you basing it on real life or something? |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow... is this about drug/alcohol addiction? |
![]() ![]() ![]() hm...what was this 'obsession'? good poem. ~kitty~ |