aw, carter that was soo emotional, very good descriptions, and EVERYTHING! *Wow* great first song thing! I loved it! Keep it up! ~*~IceAngel~*~

I can see how it's your first one, but i still really like it! Perhaps it's its simplicity that makes it work, but it does work! Very nice for a first piece *jealous*

lol, ttyl

Kat

i like the like "if you really want to go away/then why are you holding on to my hand?". it's very good; the chorus is long but that doesn't get in the way of anything.

thanks for reviewing me!

i love it. it reminds me of my relationship with my ex-boyfriend... listen. i have a friend who's in a band. i was wondering if i can use this song. my email address is

i would love to use it. im asking for your permission... so?

very good song.. hehe

pretty and very sweet i think! hehehe, good job, esp if this was your song ever, lmao, my beginning stuff...well, lets just say its better off lost in some unknown drawer somewhere, anywayz, i like it, lots of good imagry