I'd like to see where this leads. Do write more. :}

~~DarkDragonMoon~~

Please oh please write more! I have seen very few stories written in second person and this one, though short, seems to be very good. I am begging you to write more, please!

Very interesting. I would be interested to read more, but whether or not you continue is up to you. :o) I like your descriptions; very detailed, but it seems quite unfinished. You've got some things to explain...which isn't necessarily bad thing. That's likely what you were going for, and if so, you've accomplished it.

I just don't like teasers as short as this. It's hard to distinguish your style from such a short piece but let me know when you have more...

Woot! Awesomeness, V.. *-* Reminds me of a dream I had once upon a time.. heh. Your talent to capture both mind and soul in your writing still amazes me.. LYLASAAF!