|Reviews for The Ghost Ship|
| Espirione McFormith chapter 1 . 5/29/2005
Okay, you didn't research enough. Over fifteen thousand passengers died? NO! There were only 2,224 passengers on board! You MEANT 1,500. NOT 15,0! BIG HUGE Difference. But I liked this. I had to bust you for that. That was uncool, man. You're a poet, I must say, but you either don't know how to pronounce numbers, or you just saw the 15 and put down a thousand because it sounds cool. Hahahaha I'm just kidding with you. Seriously, it was a great poem. I enjoyed reading it. It was powerful.
| Kyrie Lorano chapter 1 . 2/14/2005
the beginning parts didn't have a blending rhythm, but it got better in the end. very nice.
| Andromeda chapter 1 . 9/12/2003
I think it's wonderful that you wrote a poem in memory of all those who were lost when the Titanic sank. And like someone said, you've got all your facts straight which is even better. Nice job!
| Kyalia chapter 1 . 6/9/2003
Good research there... what about the passangers picked up by the Carpathia et al.?
| kcididfnord chapter 1 . 3/21/2003
I like this poem's rhyme and rhythm ... especially the first two lines. Nicely done. :)
| Fallen Rider chapter 1 . 3/18/2003
good poem dont pull yourself down over it. keep it up