Reviews for If I Was Listening
Aulizia chapter 1 . 3/15/2003
Excellent poem! Is it God’s voice speaking? I wasn’t sure who the ‘I’ was at first, but that’s how I began to read it, and it worked very well.

The image I want see is of an estranged God who has given up hope in us and so abandoned us, but some of your lines, such as ‘But I did not listen up to them,/And I will not listen up to you.’ Seem to contradict my argument, lol so I’m not sure what I see!
Turtle Sensei chapter 1 . 3/14/2003
very nice, if i may ask what image did u see? e-mail me the answer plz, and VERY GOOD poem I like the part about the DoDo, hehe laterZZ!

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