|Reviews for The Wallflower|
| Yume Megami chapter 1 . 8/9/2004
Um...What exactly is a/the 'Wallflower'?
This piece would probably fit better under poetry, seeing how it's prose(in my view at least).
I really loved this piece, and I could relate to it(not too sure if that's a good thing...No, it IS a good thing). Being able to have your work relate to others is very good! _
I would probably add 'deepest' in front of 'dankest', for a bit more alliteration. So it'd be "deepest, dankest, darkest,..." But this is your piece not, not mine.
Keep writing, it will serve you well
| pennydeath chapter 1 . 6/10/2003
Yes. Exactly. This is exactly what I've been feeling lately. You got it down perfectly...Very nice...
| Jemelise chapter 1 . 6/3/2003
very cool...i can identify with it and enjoyed reading it...the last sentence is the best
| Cheesy Monkey chapter 1 . 4/10/2003
Short, but... Very cool. It seems more like poetry than fiction to me, but whatever.