|Reviews for After the Show|
| Mydnight Dancer chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
Really good poem... make you think!
| Daystar Searcher chapter 1 . 8/2/2004
Wow, very good. I liked how you called the sweatshirts and blue jeans 'costumes' as well.
| d4d4d chapter 1 . 3/16/2003
This is lovely. This made me think of a lot of things - empty backstage, the last few cars pulling out of a parking lot, half-empty glass of soda, full moon outside a window, the coming down from the high of standing in the lights in front of everyone.
That sounded better in my head.
(I'm no poet, and am definitely not schooled in the art of writing poetry, so as much as I'd want to critique I'm afraid I can't. But yayy, keroppii!)
| Spider chapter 1 . 3/15/2003
This is very beautiful, a very familiar story, for me. I like it a lot. *adds to favorites :)*