Reviews for Prophecy
Tamar chapter 22 . 6/12/2003
Well, I was going to email another big long chapter to you, but since I don't have the time to log into Yahoo, and do all of it, I'll just do my speel here.

You probably know my overall view of the story, utterly and totally amazing. I loved the depth of the characters, loved the plot, adored the meaning and thought put into this. I probably hounded you every time I talked to you "When's the next chapter going to be out?" Take it as a sign of how adored your writing is.

Be that as it may, I think my more favored chapters were the earlier ones. The last seemed to be a bit more fluffy with less meaning and more filling, (if that makes any sense). I almost felt that it was a rushed ending with not enough conclusion. I think in the end Eian became too 'gay', and that Kyle became too 'cynical'. The whole drag show he put on wasn't explained clearly enough. Why was he in the show, why wasn't there as much detail put into that? Why did he go in drag? What was with the nail polish? That sort of thing. Why didn't Kyle stand up for Eian? Why did he seemed so ashamed through the last chapters? Why was this never really resolved? The story ended with Kyle as a miserable old man who went back to his old habits. The ending made me think he was a pedifile (but that may just be my disjointed thinking.)

Sorry for the huge critism. You know I loved the story, the style in which it was written and obsessed over the characters (talk to my friends -; ) I just think that as a writer, you'd like to hear a friendly critique than a blossoming rave. So I mixed the two together! Happy thoughts and cookies! And hopefully, a sequal!

~*All the love*~

RekkaKouyuu chapter 5 . 6/9/2003
I love this fic so far. I'm looking forward to reading more. Eian is adorable. He's my favorite so far.
Bunny Moonstar chapter 22 . 6/9/2003
*wipes tear*...Bravo...
DisgruntledOL chapter 22 . 6/8/2003
Wow! That was so sad! But good! I really liked your characters so much! They were very distinctly individual. Not the run of the mill. I really wished however that they could have been honest with the world and been happy together forever. It would be nice to have a sequel to this where they can break their long tragic history. Please continue to write as wonderfulfully as you have in the past. Always a fan.
Ellyria chapter 22 . 6/7/2003
That was a really beautiful and touching story. Looking forward to the sequel. Will keep checking for updates~
Liebe Sasa chapter 22 . 6/7/2003
Wow... This is the first time in a long time that a story has made me cry. Amazing, truly amazing, piece of work.

~Mizery Rose~
Flyet chapter 22 . 6/7/2003
Wow, That almost got me to tears! I can't beleive you killed Eian off! I can't wait to read the sequel! It was a great story!
jaclynn chapter 22 . 6/5/2003
Beautiful story. Definately the best I've read so far ).
V-45 chapter 22 . 6/4/2003
[K. Reeves] Whoa... [/K. Reeves]

Seriously... whoa.

Do you know how to put in plot twists or not?

My head's still spinnin! _

On the other hand,


I look forward to reading that sequel you promised. _
OffigateStuppy chapter 22 . 6/4/2003
Nieni: *sobs* I hate sad endings! Why do all good stories always have a sad ending? I swear, I'm never going to write a sad ending ever!
Lucy chapter 22 . 6/4/2003
WOW...just wow

i was like not blinking or breathing at all; what a good story

looking forward to that sequel
Little Black Book chapter 22 . 6/4/2003
Damn good.
rallenta chapter 22 . 6/4/2003
I really don't know how to start this, because I have told you plenty of times what I think of this story and my opinion of it has not changed a great deal from beginning to end. I wish the boys could've broke the cycle, though. Whenever there is a "dramatic absence" (trying no to create obvious spoilers)of a vital character within a story, I believe that this "absence" can only be validated if the other characters in the story learn from it. I think validation is present in the Prophecy itself.

Aside from that analytical view point, though, I would very much anjoy reading anything else Eian/Kyle/Next Lives centric. Thank you for keeping me entertained for the pass few months, putting up with my babbling and all. Needless to say, I Will Be Reading.

-'- Rallen -'-
Finny-Rocks chapter 1 . 6/3/2003
dude, i love this story! keep updating! now!
swim052001 chapter 2 . 6/2/2003
Hey I really like your story. Normally I am not into gay/lesbian stories but this story was really good and opened my eyes in a different way. I like the way you wrote it and I hope you continue writing. I also like the way you formatted the writing but I think more dialog should be added but other than that the story is great! Write On!
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