Reviews for Prophecy
rallenta chapter 16 . 4/6/2003
I am so behind on my reviews! My computer decided to lapse into a coma five days ago, so I am just now reading updates and such. Before my computer's illness I just couldn't think of anything to say that I hadn't said before, however, now I think I understand my feelings toward this story.

The whole past lives thing threw me off like.." Wha? Whoa...wow...when?"
Whamsicle chapter 16 . 4/4/2003
I must say, I am thorughly *stunned* by your story. So much to the fact that all my signatures, email nicnames...ect. have become (Love knows no gender) A bit of an offshoot of your coined phrase. I am so...estatic that finally, somebody has written something spectacular without being crass. Too many stories these days, namely male/male stories are lemons. Pointless, drab, erotic-sure, but with no real meaning.

You have managed to create a tastefully envisioned peice of art. We've sat and watched Kyle and Eian grow together, grow apart, and strengthen their bond through their heartache. You've touched upon the parody that, love knows no end and that it truly will prevail, and it has! It truly has in your work.

If only for me, I do hope that you'll continue the story to the very end. I've refrained from reviewing other chapters only because I've been gripping my seat, wiping tears and grinning like such the idiot that any typing I could have managed would have fallen far below incoherent.

My review is turning into a...*Sigh*... note of adoration. The story allows much to be admired though. I suspect that you'll be wanting comments on exactly what was good, what was touchy... any writer would, so here goes.

I especially liked the way you've developed your characters. The cunning switch of roles (a dominant, protective Kyle and weak, small Eian have completely united and reveresed). Quite specultive. I loved that, though I do hope they'll meet at a more common ground.

I find that you're wording is quite exquisite. You have the language of one who Role Plays. This leads me to wonder if you do? Be this the case or no, I've found that your character's speech is rather non-realisitc. In this day of age the word usage seems a bit flowery. This adds to the artistic flow of the peice though, so no worrys.

You've thoroughly distinguished joy and pain. I originally began browsing and stumbled upon yours. My first thought was, great- another stupid, crude lemon that some author has streached into a 15 page novel, I've got to see how she's pulled this off. In short, I was delighted to find the complete opposite of my assumptions. The plot has moved along at a well thought out pace, though sometimes the jumping from week to week is hard to distinguish. You've not kept them lingering on the same dry details, and you've added suspense, and true love into the story.

You've touched me and for that I am most thankful. Please continue writing, the lack of reviews is most likely not because they have not enjoyed it, I don't see how that is possible. Merely the don't think that their words could sum up the integrity of this peice. I hope I've touched a bit of how excellent this is.

~*Love knows no gender*~

/I do belive that the only other person I've put this much effort into making sure they understand the sheer amount of near-perfection in their work is Tigerbabe at who wrote Web of Sorrow. I'm not sure if you've read her, but you should.\

I'll let you *CONTINUE* you're writing. *subtle hinting* Have a nice night.

/PPS: Our birthday's are on the same date! March 27th, am I correct? How strange. \
Eternal Twilight chapter 16 . 4/4/2003
I don't think that people don't like the story itself, but I just kinda stopped revewing for a while because I was waiting for it to focus on Kyle and Eian themselves, versus the past flashback things with the other people. But that's just me. I'm glad he finally told off that broad Kat, and if you do want to end it here- go for it. Though, I can see one las fluffy chapter before you do end it out though. I think if you make something last for too long- it loses it's spark in a way. But it's up to you as you're the author. Either or, I'll still be reading because I do want to know what happens next. Tne two have had enough angst- time for some well-needed fluff! _
AmethystSky1 chapter 16 . 4/4/2003
NO! Please don't stop there you still have to explain how their pastlives fit into everything. Although you made Kyle and Eian alittle to sappy like chapter 11, but you made it up, thank goodness. I didn't expect that 180 degree turn. I'm looking forward to seeing more of a change in Eian since Kyle is the only one doing all thing changing. I believe that every experience in our lives change us no even a small factor can change the course of one's future. I'm looking forward to more of your work.
Alle chapter 16 . 4/4/2003
I think this was one of the best chapters so far. I like that they are happy and hope that they stay happy for a while, the poor things have had enough problems in their relationship. Keep writing.
Olusha chapter 16 . 4/4/2003
Oh Nononononono! Please don't stop !

I adore you story - it is really well written and interesting! I love stories about relationship without much torture and thank you for writing one! The Boys are wonderful and i have never disliked Kyle, knew he would turn out good guy :) I just love Eian (cute name, not smth usual like Everybody nametheir characters Josh or Jack?) He reminds me of elf,pretty . I know boys do get offended if you tell them they are pretty, but he is :) So continue the story , please, o'k?
jules2206 chapter 16 . 4/4/2003
wow, i loe this story, it took me ages to read it, is there gonna be anymore, cos if there is I HAVE TO READ IT!
casey chapter 16 . 4/4/2003
that's right Kyle, you tell that bitch Kat! mwhahaha.. er.. yay! Keep writing! I love the story! It rocks every chapter, I just don't want to sound repetitive!

-casey
Flyet chapter 15 . 4/2/2003
Hey! Not enough of Kyle and Eian! Past life stories are good but it's no fair to the rebirthed that we don't get to see their lives! lol. Please update soon!
mistressofterror chapter 14 . 4/1/2003
Ohh is this yet another past life? You story has me intranced and I can't wait to read more.
Flyet chapter 14 . 3/31/2003
Oh-my! What happens next? Update soon!
slip chapter 13 . 3/30/2003
I don't know what to say...just wow. Too sweet. I love it.

slip
redredredred chapter 13 . 3/29/2003
hehehehehhe how cute! yeah, they're back together! i love this story, oh, more angst! but wait did Kyle and Kat really rape him?1 i though he would have been too passed out... well, hope you post soon!

tchao,

~redredredred
Forever Unknown chapter 13 . 3/27/2003
Aww...that was great. I love your story! This chapter almost made me cry...anyways uhh please continue with this soon. You are one of the best authors on this darn site! oh and happy b-day!
K.M chapter 13 . 3/27/2003
I never reviewed before but I thought it would make a decent enough birthday present. I really like this story, the way you write is just amazing and I look foreward to whatever happens next.

Happy Birthday wishes!

Good luck and Happy Writing,

~K.M.
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