|Reviews for Plastic Smiles|
| super happy nuclear girl chapter 1 . 7/25/2006
and if all the worldis a stagewhy can't i memorizemy linesfor the next act
- i love that line(s)
very good poem, I really enjoyed it.
| JazzPizza chapter 1 . 6/15/2004
Depressing and cynical, but very interesting. I like your use of metaphors.
All I think this needs is a bit more formatting to give it some direction. It dovetails pretty well thematically from piece to piece, but sometimes the writing itself seems to stumble.
| NovaKayne chapter 1 . 7/9/2003
Wow. Powerful shit. Great. Superior writing. Hard to put a finger on what I liked most. Wonderful! Write more!
| target bath chapter 1 . 4/30/2003
cool. i think it'd make an interesting painting.
| Hopes Forgotten chapter 1 . 3/15/2003
That's really good.