What an intruiging story! This is well written and interesting. I shall favoritize it immeadiately. :)

Wow! This is really great so far. I can't wait to see more of this!

Wow! Damn good story! I enjoyed this chapter the most, it seems like a fitting conclusion, actually it is, but i would like to see more(if you have any planned i mine) keep up the good work!

Wow, it took me some time, but I'm at this chapter and I have to say "Dang!" Definitely a masterpiece in my mind. And, of course, with what Lauren did you can only say "who's the real monster here?" If Erin's about to do what I think she is, she's gonna have a real bad time when it all comes back to her.

Sorry I haven't been keeping up. I've been a little cramped and all, a lot of things going on and such.

So... there's a new threat for young Erin. That poor gurl. She doesn't even know about him and she's gonna walk straight into a trap. Hm... Keep writing and update soon!

Peachez _~

Great story, so far! I usually like vampires but you've got me intrigued. I'll read the rest later. Can you read my story Alpha and Omega and the movie Underworld come out 9/19/03, so check it out. I will.

Very interesting. Werewolves are my favorite supernatural monsters and I haven't read many good stories about them. Fortunately this story was top notch, continue the good work.

That poor girl's just not having an easy time, is she? Well I hope things turn up for her. I mean I guess they are in some places, but that hunter's going to be a real problem. And will she tell her parents? hm.. keep writing and update soon!

Peachez _~

Hey, this is really good. She attacked her brother. That would be hard to accept, and he must be really confused. Poor kid. I hope you update soon, this is great!

Peachez _~

This is good. Very good description. Although, in the very first sentence, it's difficult to tell if it's Erin or Owen that's speaking. I like this and hope you write more.