Reviews for I Remember Roses |
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Chocolate Herrings chapter 1 . 1/21/2007 Powerful. Beautiful imagery. I love the line, 'But I brandished my poor dull lopping shears In vain.' |
csisciencegeek chapter 1 . 7/23/2005 oh wow, wow...thats really good |
Fairy in Black and White chapter 1 . 7/2/2005 Wow...this is very powerful. Excellently written. I like the vivid descriptions very much. Good job! |
catseyeview chapter 1 . 5/14/2004 Smart imagery. I like your description of the roses as canes, a crutch or even something sweet...once already leaned upon or tasted, you bear the scars even after you let go of the cane or its sugar melts away...very nice imagery. |
Gracey London chapter 1 . 3/29/2004 Wonderful last stanza. Lots of power in those words. The comparison between the roses and love (thorns, pain) is great! -Museworks |
DarkFairie.RogueSpirit chapter 1 . 2/23/2004 I love this poem it is full of thought I think you are good at writing these type of poems If this is the only type of poem you write i don't think you would like my poem torture. |
Shaughna chapter 1 . 2/23/2004 I really like it. I have never read one that captures the feeling this well. |
Scarface chapter 1 . 1/4/2004 I liked the beginning it was very exprecitive of your feelings, but the middle about wipping canes made me think about an old lady. |
rosiechicky24 chapter 1 . 11/10/2003 I like your metaphor of love portrayed as roses...very nice rr some of my stuff if you get the chance |
pam pam chapter 1 . 10/11/2003 wow its awesome i can picture it in my head |
NeoHaku chapter 1 . 7/31/2003 Really good poem, but the ending hit me right there! Keep up the good work! ) |
Mel Raye chapter 1 . 7/18/2003 its a beautiful poem. keep on going. |
NailsOfNineInches chapter 1 . 7/12/2003 I know how that feels. Good poem; keep writing. |
Unknowable chapter 1 . 6/14/2003 aww. i like it. |
Twisted Not Broken chapter 1 . 6/9/2003 WOW! that is one of the BEST poems i've read possibly EVER! seriously the visual details were amazing and the way you made the connections between love and roses... simply beautiful! no words can describe the awsomeness of this! wow i wish i could write *half* as amazing as this! |